Really, really good- your writing style flows very well, and your characterizations were very spot-on. Congratulations!

Just caught up with this story. Wow. You have a really nice feel for the characters and for dialogue. Reading your stuff makes me feel like "this HAS to be how it happened!", which is quite an achievement. Keep up the good work.

I love this so much. The tone of the story. The dialogue - it's just so them.

I can't even leave a coherent comment explaining why I think this is awesome right now. Just everything about this is perfect, pretty much.

“Still, she had whispered, while patting down his bed head that morning, that sometimes the things you lose come back to you. And House didn't know what the fuck she was talking about.”

And this is another example of why you are one of my favorite authors, these sharp, smart, well-written stories that have rhythm and snappy dialogue. Bravo on another winner.

This was amazing. Very creative, extraordinarily well-written. Funny, sad, all-around awesome! :) Excellent work! Can't believe this doesn't have more reviews than it does.

This is a good infarction-era story! There are a number of them out there already and this rates among the top 5 or so that I've read. Very interesting, and I hope you keep going with it!