OMFG, I KNEW IT. I KNEW IT, I KNEW IT, *I KNEW IT!*
/SPAZZOUT MOMENT.
XD

...HOLY SHIZZLES.
THAT is an *awesome* power. Like...really, really, really, REALLY awesome.
Of course, I realized the strange occurrences had *something* to do with Mar, but I never thought it'd be her Devil Fruit power... wow. Suddenly, everything makes sense...
Anyways. That was clever. Very clever. I never would've thought of it...TT
Just thought I should let you know that I approve of her power...and the fact that it kinda blew me outta the water. XD

I don't like Oc, that's why I always skip this story, but then I'm bored and decided to read the first chapter, somehow I found my self staring at the review button on chapter 33, heck, I love the way you write this, especialy their personality, you did a great job at teaching how to write fictional yet logical Oc, some people need that, for example me, lolz, okay, since it's already complete and people already pointed out a lot of things, I'll just jump to that eleven supernova, good luck

Dear author, I just wanted to say that this fic is so far, the best, the best-est (if there is such a word) I've ever read... From the beginning til the end, I loved it... Just finished this last night, ended up sleeping at one... LOL, but worth it! i had to rush and make an account just to make a review! That's how I love you! And even though this wasn't supposed to be a romance, I ship Law X Mar! Who cares about the 30 year gap! And...
Do you mind if I make a fanart of this? I've been dying to draw this!
Please PM me if its okay with you... Thanks!
And thanks again for making this wonderful story... Really Great!

I found out about this fic yesterday through TVTropes, and, I must say, the story is intriguing! I was doin some research on dem tropes for a new idea I had, only to find that you wrote something very similar... I hope you keep up the good work with your other fics as well!

Man is epic. Literally Hehe

This made my heart hurt. Seriously. It did. I'm kinda depressed now. I… like? the ending, but…. ugh… you know...

YES! It's that bitches fault that the Straw Hat Pirates aren't (alive) anymore! She. Shall. PAY!

NOOOOOOOOO! CHOPPER! WHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHWYWHYWHWY! AH!{LLMZDSLVNDFJKVAERMNVLSEKNRFJKARNDVKAREMNJKVNA' RDKZJGV'O'NREIOJDVPONDSFPBNSFDBNDFBNBNDNVXNFVKJDNF OKAJVB W#RP{k'p23wi't
SPKXEEM:M$:LTK$O$I)IT$JE:LFMRKNGEMSLMW#:M!: PI#!$ #K:TJ;fsm:VMRE:G%EP)

WHAT?! I freaking knew you had to be messing with us… of course you killed off Chopper… one of my favorites… :'(
JUST LET ME CRY IN PEACE!

So…. Disinfector Tony Tony Chopper. Basically. Though, I wouldn't be surprised if you were just messing with us or something. XD

I cracked up when the disinfector said that. I have no idea why. XD

Well, that's an amazingly overpowered OC, is it not?
So… Mar is the one changing things…?
And also, The Disinfector is really starting to get on my nerves… I WANT TO KNOW WHO HE IS!

AND WHO, PRAY TELL, IS THAT?

I'm never really been into the OP fandom but more with robots and space despite having read the manga to be move and cry like a baby so many times. So on a bored day (today actually), after having reread OP again the day before, my brain decided, "Hey, it's a freaking Wednesday. I don't deserve this. Even though I have an essay to outline, a test and a quiz to study for tomorrow, I'll read a OP fanfic! " And I avoided the typical romance ones because I'm always more interested in stories cleverly written using the world and not violating any rules like a Mary-Sue.
Since I'm not so interested in the series, I promised myself to only read ONE fic. And Phalanx, dear author, have given me the best possible story to read. Captivated by you summary, then your first chapter, I kept going through all 33 chapters freaking NON-STOP. It seems I don't have the necessary words to praise for this twisted and heart-warming fic. I don't know how many times I cried. Chapter 32 did numbers to my eyes - I think they got soggy from the tears. While I thought that the several use of Japanese terms wasn't really suited - not used to them - I continued on for the rich plot. Now that I think about it, nakama is a very special word in OP not to be unused.
I've been wondering about the Mary Sues of the story in the messed timeline - are they a messed up result in the world?
Nevertheless...Fantastic job, applause, bravo. Thank you for your brilliance and I'll held Mar in a special place in my heart to not to be forgotten.