God! I love this cold, silent Naruto with a kinda-daughter-but-still-not 3 Great! I love it :)

this is good for a story

luv the story! . tho' i found naru 2 b kinda cold wonder why... luv da last line - "Grinning softly, Naruto led a slightly limping Sasuke to the site of his next mission." Flawless! XD

Hahaha, this was cute! I enjoyed it!

woot woot chicken soup! nice! i had a happy little spazz attack near the end :) and Saya-chan is really cute! Where'd you think of the name cause oddly enough my Oc is called Saya too (short for Sayoko) but still nice *happy face*