Hey, Anth. I liked this one, a lot. Jon was a great character and he has a good intro.

Reading through Arcadiafics, just liek I promised. Hoping to bone up for...something. Won't say what, but you'll be the first to know.

Aw, think you could resurrect some of the Mystic foxes? Like the way Ralius was brought back.

*snickers* It would've been funny had you try to have Jonathan try to hit on Sasha.

Well, that was interesting, although not quite as good as the others I've read so far.

Please start writing soon!

i still say that it's just a variation upon the same stories you've been having all along. free from roboticization, reunite with family, heal, don't kill, etc. BUT that doesn't stop it frmo being a GREAT story!

other than the fact that it's starting to grate on my nerves that that's all anthony ever seems to do, it's quite itneresting.

also, i'm going to send you an e-mail about a possible idea you might want to write about later-on... a sort of resurrection of dr. willy... hehehe.

and i still say that you have GOt to get yourself an enemy. someone that can actually stand up to you, that ISN'T you, hehehe.

preferrably someone that's like way loads more powerful than you... or something like that. so you actually have a REASON to go about getting more powerful, and more allies :)

so other than that, there isn't all that much you need to do. although getting anthony some better technology, or just an upgrade, as well as teaching him some magic would be interesting... like getting that sword of the gamemaster upgraded in hyrule...

so this is less of a review and more of ideas to impliment in future stories :)

as for the story itself... it's great. i've already told you everything that you need to work on... description, and new plot twists, enemies, locations, etc. just sorta mix it up, seeing as it's really just become a sonic fanfic, with a few other things added for effect.

not that i'm complaining. because it's great :)

oh yeah... by the way... have i said it's great yet? because it is.

Arthur E. King

okay here's a question that's been nagging me for some time now...ever since you wrote the story of how anthony was roboticized...

you take a person like anthony, roboticize him, then use the technology from earth, neo-earth, and mobius (not to mention protoman's descendency powers, which will have the ultimate technology from all five) to upgrade the person to as great an extent as possible.

thewn deroboticize the guy all over again.

what would happen? think about it.

anyways... this one sounds like it could be interesting... i'll just have to keep reading to find out :)

Arthur E. King

every time i read another chapter of your story, it keeps getting better.

not to annoy to or anything, but you had my story on your site, but got the address a little wrong, here's the correct one: . ?storyid896562

you only messed up on the last three numbers, they are 562, not 135. thanks, and please don't sent me a bad reveiw because of this.

hey again anthony, i was reading this chapter and i think that it's pretty good.

and i'm just asking, in your bio, you had a web site with all the Arcadia series in it.

i just started another fan fic with you and jeff VanVranken in it and i was wondering if your could please read and review it, and put it on that site. thanks

The quality of your stories have not diminished in excellence. I thoroughly enjoyed reading about the new addition to the heroes... and thought about how often we take friends and family for granted...

MOre more more

great story

Another great work.

EEEEEEEEEEEE! That was good!

Great one man.

woah... niiiiiiiiccccceeeee!

I HAIL YOU!

Wow, so good... O Wise L33t Sensei! *hails Anthony and such*