I actually read this in your DA, AND oh my, it completely made my day! I love the emotion, the flow, the characters! I expect nothing less from a Persona gamer. ;) GREAT JOB! I hope you write more. ;)

this is sheer brilliance! I love each little set of the reality/dream parts! AND YOU MADE IT A HAPPY ENDING! Seriously I adore them. You did them justice! 8D

Pssh, yeah. I thought Akihiko was adorable with the girl-shyness and all but having to say that he's in love, well, uh, okay. Ignoring that teeny tiny little part, he's still adorable. And yes, it was hard to distinguish which part was Akihiko's Happy Land, and which was not. Oh well. I liked it, and I enjoyed reading it. I was just thinking if maybe there's a FeMC/Aki family fic out there last night, oh joy.

*faves* :)

THIS. THIS. NNGGGH

I dunno man, this story panned from being fluffy and oh my god cute and ponies and rainbows to seriously depressing and then cute and cuddly and urgh depressing etc etc. And the end! Oh gawd, I could have sworn I could see a shit-ton of angst ending like Aki going crazy from the illusions and Miki ending up like Aki's sister all dead and ashes and-SDFGHJKJ;

tl;dr, this story was a complete roller coaster of emotions, thank you for writing this. It is a very good read.

Oh man, I was sitting here thinking 'why you break my heart for D:' until I got to the end. YAY! :)

And that is an achievement on your part because I HATE babies, and children in general (I work in retail, it's not my fault!), but dude, it just WORKED.

Also, crowning moment of awesome from Shinji there: "I lied about him being my Seeing Eye dog." Hahahaha, epic.

This made me cry xD, it was a really sweet story, i loved it. Great Job