pretty good, not the best, try to put some more of the family,

I like it, its VERY Beach, but... it made NO mention of Paul... that's sad. ( I miss Paul (John Ritter) what happened to DADDY dearest... does she NOT miss him at all? *cries* can you write another entry and include a mention of ehr dad, for me *bats eyelashes* D

realy unreal u nee to work on it a lot

Wonderful!

Hey chuni chan! Congrats on your second story! Personally I think it's better than the other one. Love your bff mewphon!