Oh, I love your writing style! :D And I really love this fanfic. I wonder what Ivan has in store for Toris and I hope that this is continued even though it hasn't been update for 2 years, lol. ;

Oh I really hope you continue this someday, I really want to know what Ivan has in store for Toris!

You write the most amazing AU stories, did you know that? o:

Please do continue it! It good so far and I love your stories 3

Ah Sephi this is wonderful! You probably won't continue it consider how long it's just been sitting, although I'd love to see anything you have written up!

(This is ochone from DA by the way C: )

I personally loved reading this fanfic. It is very well written, and captures the viewers attention which made me craved more. I do hope you update. I enjoyed the way you worked up having Toris have a back story and instead of just throwing out a PWP. I'm glad that your an awesome writer. It's people like you that make visiting worthwhile! *thumbsup*

Definitely... worth... continuing. * *

I haven't read something this good in quite a while! Thank you very very much!

You're like an ideas machine. This seems so promising. I hope you get the time to update.

This was brilliant! The steampunk theme is very fascinating too.

Curse you for making me want to see what happens next! I don't want to give you too many stories to overwhelm you...but this is just so 3

In any case, any story update you make will be much enjoyed. :3

This looks like a pretty interesting start. i like it so far, and I wonder what Ivan is planning. Nothing to pleasant by the sounds of it. I kind of wish you described the world just a little more, the setting doesn't feel concrete to me I can't really imagine it . itf it's suppsoed to be another worlds why are there russian then?

I vote this gets updated, definitely; love the way it's looking.

I am very very intrigued by this story! I love how much mood you put into you stories and this is no different :D I understand that you have prior fics that require your attention before this one, but I hope you update this eventually :D

This is brilliant! Ah, I love it. :D Please do continue; you have such a flair for writing! :) I can't even describe how good this is, but it's better than nearly all the published works I read. :D

This is really amazing! I can't wait to read more 33

Your story has my interest. Please write more.