 MaskedGrace 12/10/04 . chapter 1Aww. That's sad. Really sad. Very Sad. (Did I mention sad? lol) But very well written. Good use of imagery through the entire thing. Now onto the following story! :) |
 Alamo Girl 12/8/04 . chapter 1Beautiful. Thats all I can say. A wonderful look at what leaving did to Riddick and Jack, and how that will affect their future in you sequal story. Great Job! As I said before, YOU ROCK! |
 Riddicksapprentice 7/21/04 . chapter 1I need a tissue. I like how you stayed in charecter of all three. Please don't stop it was great. |
 Rien Katrina 3/3/04 . chapter 1 sad, yet, beautiful. I love it, felt the hurt when I read the story. Damn, that one got me. Please continue. |
 Erratic Hippie 2/14/04 . chapter 1*Sniffle* ...*tear* ...*sniffle* ...
That was bittersweet and beautiful. |
 emma 3/17/02 . chapter 1 Nice bit of background to the first fic. Loads of emotion. I enjoyed reading it and am looking forward to reading more. _ |
 candylyn 3/3/02 . chapter 1 Ouch. Well done and very fitting. I'll be waiting for the update on Badlands. |
 elly 3/2/02 . chapter 1 This and the Badlands are definite gems in the fanfic world. I read your story and it made *me* want to write. Only two other stories have done that. Please, please, for the love of Riddick and all that is good, keep writing! |
 bubblegirl3 3/2/02 . chapter 1Really smooth! But if you think this gets you outta writing more for badlands then boy are you wrong! I need another hit of badlands! lol great prequel XX bubbles |
 ames 3/2/02 . chapter 1 Awh,that was beautiful! I totally love that song! Not to mentions "Badlands"! |
 Mockingbard 3/2/02 . chapter 1Yeah, ok, I give. I just wanted an excuse to write a songfic. :) |