Very cute... great job :)

"And I didn't even have to twist your arm?". Lol

Hey, this is me, Amy, judging on the last day possible.

of course.

First of all, I've got to say that I quite like it ;)

Secondly, here's the part you really care about.

TITLE: 4/5

Yeah, I like it, and it reallyreally explains a lot about it and all, but I like reallyreally creative titles a little bit more, hehe.

ORIGINALITY: 4/5

It was great, honestly, it was. But it was sort of the obvious answer to the prompt, y'know?

BELIEVABILITY: 5/5

I think you had them in character, and Sirius /is/ the godfather, and James and Lily were together and, ugh, it was just well written and everything too?

OVERALL: 4/5

It was really good d

BoNuS: 2 for the same reasons as el otro judges said.

L:17/20 2

19/20

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That was so sweet. I really loved it even though it was rather fluffy. It was a good fluff though not a bad one. Now onto the judging.

Title: 4/5 A very good title. I think it summed up the piece quite well.

Originality: 3/5 I thought this was original, but with the prompt I gave you I kind of expected this situation to arise. I like how you went in depth though with Sirius at the end it was really cute.

Believability: 4/5 It was believable, but at the end I got the feeling that James was a little to happy.

Overall: 4/5 Very well written and it was a great read. I liked the dynamic between Lily and James it made the piece so good.

Bonus Points: 2 points for mentioning an OC Lily’s mother.

Total Points: 17/20 Great job and thanks for entering the competition. :D

Here to judge once again!

Title:5/5. very fitting.

Originality: 4/5. it was James who seemed very in character to me, though it was Lily majorly!

Believability:5/5. it was a canon missing moment and you've written it quite well.

encompassing fic.

Now for the bonus:

2 points for mentioning an OC, Lily's mother

that makes it a total of...21/20.

all the best!

haha very cute. great job :)

It was wonderful!

Peace

That's good, I like it.