   StarDancer1234 6/16/06 . chapter 1LMAO! |
| Blahsblah2001 1/16/06 . chapter 1 Ha! This is brilliant... I think there was an Ura- sai once that said why they didn't fly. Something about the cigarrettes, I think.
I did catch one mistake, when you said Sanzo picked up the gun It was S&M instead of S&W. Usually spelling mistakes aren't that bad... but i think that one ya might wanna fix.
_melissa
PS since when is Gojyo a virgin? |
| soya 4/13/04 . chapter 1 CUTE! |
| silverlimit 3/19/04 . chapter 1 *laughs*This is really,very should write more Saiyuki fics!I was rolling around on my bed laughing my heads off when I read this.(although my mom thought that I was having some kind of seizure and almost called the ambulance.
-;)But this is on writing! |
| acern 2/29/04 . chapter 1 how /does/ he fit all that in his spandex space? |
| Unseen Watcher 10/3/03 . chapter 1 HAHAHAHAHAHA! YES! I can picture it! *cackles evilly* |
| amaltia 8/9/03 . chapter 1 WAI! That was funny... guess we should all be glad that the Sanzo-ikkou doesnt go to airports... hahahaha... |
| YunCyn 5/9/03 . chapter 1 Definitely an inspiration! And thanks for the laughs! *guffaws over Hakkai's 'pet'* |
| cool-kitsune 12/17/02 . chapter 1 Erm.. why do they have to ummm... ride a plane? |
| Saiyukifan 12/16/02 . chapter 1 ha ha. i was laughing throughout the whole song! i choked on my sandwhich. |
| gentle yaoi lover 11/17/02 . chapter 1 Wheeeeeee! What silly fun! I loved it when Gojyo yelled, "I don't want to die a virgin!" It made me laugh until my sides hurt! Good grief this was funny. I only wish it hadn't reminded me of the September 11th tragedy. I think the Sanzo-ikkou needs to be a little more aware of such things. Otherwise, very cool and lots of fun. Now, let's send the boys on a camping trip filled with bears, poison ivy, and snakebite, okay? |
| NuttyScribbler 11/5/02 . chapter 1 Ok...you're great...WOO HOO! more more more!
ok...one minor detail that i'll like to point out. Sanzo's throbbing vein isn't located in his forehead. Ok, maybe he has one there...but due to his hairstyle...it's pretty hard to spot. Anyway, from the anime, i've noticed that the vein is usually located right below his left eye. |
| Meira Kurosaki 10/26/02 . chapter 1 sugoi! *LOL* please write more! it's so much fun!_
hontoni !
Sanzo: Urusai...I'm reading here... *thwack*
Me: ouch... |
| pinkdragonflame 9/3/02 . chapter 1 hehe! super suuugoi! can't imagine what the security guards were thinking...probably quit on the same day |
| dref 8/16/02 . chapter 1 ohhh!
so that's the reason why hey took the long way there!
hahahaha!
huggles and kisses
dref |
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