Wow great story! I like how you were able to still tell the your story and without getting away from the sins.

I think I unknowingly stole your idea though. When book spells explains the kids at the orfanage to Jayne. I started out my first story kind of the same way with Book noticing that Jayne was pulling pig-tales.

Excellent! Glad I stopped by. Going to look at some more of your stuff now.

However, much more marriage and babies and I'll have to skip on to something else. ;)

Not often that a disclaimer catches my attention enough to cause a review, but this one did: "If I owned them less clothes would be involved."

All I can say to that is a joyous AMEN! Oh, yeah...lust.

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Loved the story, thanks.

I love that I can easily picture this ending in my head, lol :D

Okay love this one as I love all your stories. I've been saving your Chosen verse for when I was done with class.

But I can't figure it out. What does Saligia stand for?

Very enjoyabl! Interesting theme. I love Jayne so much! Isn't it funny how one man can embody so many negative attributes and still be so gosh darn loveable? Ha ha I can't help myself :)