He should bend Revy over his lap and spank her ass good. Maybe at Bao's place

Holy shit how does this not have more reviews. Those were the best 7000 words I have ever read.

that was great. loved the ending sentence lol hour latter im still laughing

Overall good. Personally I dont like when people refer to the female anatomy as sex, but thats me. You really portrayed Revy's character well.

[Dr Gonzo: Wow ... and by that I mean WOW? ,,, and can I just restate for the record WOW ... and in conclusion holy fraking WOW]

I second that 'WOW' and also the 'WOW' . awesome job!

NICE!

Yanno... I could see this happening, I really could. It'd be... Very Black Lagoonish, if I may put it that way.

Oh, and nice work. I liked it.

AMAZING STORY!

OMG loves it :D

! That was haaaaawt! 8O I love RevyxRock and you TOTALLY just made a fangirl very happy, especially since I can actually see this happening. Hee hee! Awesome writing! Adore the end. Too funny!

Very sexy and works great with the situation.

excellent fic! this is my second time reading a fanfic of black lagoon. but this is the only one that caught my interest, lol. anyway i also think that her hair is brown and sometimes maroon? isnt it? but just my opinion. but who cares, i still love this story

Amazing and stunning. I have read every fan fic on this site and every few weeks I have to come back and reread this one over and over again. I would love to see more of this.

Until then, I'll be in my bunk.

daaaaayum. _

this could totally happen. and I imagine Rock WOULD be great in bed, he's certainly attentive _ all he needs is the gunpowder to set off his silver bullet

wow, such a hot fic *fans herself*

Nice! This was great! I too was looking forward to the third season. Revy is sexy sexy! This one shot was great! There were a few misspelled words, I think around two or three, but other than that, everything looked good.