I wouldn't feel attracted to him, I'd probably end up fighting with everyone, except for rin. I'm a heart of stone. :P Eh, I'm just a natural born fighter I guess. Oh, by the way, great story. :)

Beautiful. So damn beautiful.

This was one of the best I've read! So beautifully written! You did an amazing job on this :)!

I'm just going to reread it again :)!

This was simply beautiful. The story flowed like poetry from a master poet. Very discriptive and captivating. It surprises me that you have not recieved more reviews:/ but again. Beautiful it's like a little bit of heaven

i just wanted to tell you how much i loved this and i hope and pray this gets to you in a good way .. you have a got for word the LORD gave you a wonderful gift please use it more offten..god bless.. p.s. i am so adding you to my newest fav. writer sweetie.. again best of wises

As I was reading your story I was thinking that it looked like poetry. The way you described things and the way of writing were amazing! I loved this fiction. Added to favorites!

Jo

I got sidetracked along the way (mostly because I have about five stories floting around in my brain), but this was a really sweet story. :)

Your story lines are good, but the overwhelming amount of detail you put into the story destracts the readers. Try less details, maybe. And I'm not being mean, just some friendly advice :)

This was great! :)

This was... hmm... I don't even have the right words to describe it. It sweet, romantic, and very nicely described. I can see that you like to read. Your vocabulary is very elevated.

However I have a question. What's the time-line of this story? Modern times or past? Because if it's past you should pay more attention to the things she knows like " my mind would be as dark, black, and stormy as nimbus clouds". If she is in the past how does she possesses such knowledge? There is no way she knows about nimbus clouds much less about what happens inside a nimbus cloud.

Beside than this small errors you made your story is a good one. Very refreshing.

wow that was really good

Very poetic. It was refreshing. I like it.