Terrific! U really brought adeles character to life :))

This was really good. I think it's an amzaing way of capturing Alf and Adele's feelings for each other!

As mentioned by other reviewers, I also enjoyed your accurate depictions of the characters. This piece is easy to read, and very entertaining. Most of the time when I read oneshots, my eyes tend to skip over lines to get to the point but every line was interesting enough for me to want to read it, which is great. I like it.

Really good story! The babble at the beginning from both Serge and Leslie made it seem so believable, and all of the characters were done flawlessly. But poor Alf...

Another good job from you...another party gives basically another myriad of situations, and the Absin Rogress as the whole "Alf adbenture" surely are perfect fanfiction material, really loved the small Leslie and Serge interaction too.