Just finished the game. Love the game and your fic!

I think this is a good idea for a story, but I'm having a hard time reading this because the paragraphs are so big, and it is straining my eyes.

To fix that, when a new person is speaking, start a new paragraph. It is much cleaner, and easier on the eyes too! I'll be able to read and give a proper review then.

Oh and welcome to the My World My Way section! I really wish there were more stories on this game.