Just starting to read through your stories. Loved this it was wonderful!

I would totally love to see a follow up chapter...Fallout is a beautiful thing..lol...

Personally, I think Jayne wouldn't have made a move until River grew up just a bit more, but for this I don't care. It's too good. ;)

haha, love it! sooo worth it!

I enjoyed that! I liked his last statement. :)

Really good story!

Your stories are very addictive!

*TCandBTVSluver*

You skipped a few parts from the BDM ie when he goes to ship her out in the shuttle...BUT, I love the fact you address what happens immediately post fight scene. Very realistic...very well written.

I am really enjoying your work...PLEASE keep it up!

(giggles) Cute. -jw'chan -

Aaaaaaaand again... amazing amazing amazing amazing. How I have not found your stories before is beyond me. I think you are my soulmate.

Alright, sorry, got a little ahead of myself there. But seriously... great.

:)

You are soooo getting posted in my LJ.

I would so love a follow up... really... seriously... even just an epiloge, but I really want to know what happened next.

Pretty please with sugar on top... you know if you have an idea, or the seed of an idea... if not though, if this is all there will be, that's not bad either. You can only write what comes to you.

That final scene was really hot!

I love it

I can just imagine what everyone is thinking when Jayne walks up and kisses River

I I really hope that you will write more to this story

Well, I'd never want to deny you air! This was a great 2nd person narrative, full of Jayne-y goodness. You did a great job of portraying his slowly evolving thoughts about River, and this is a great ending to the movie! Hell, yeah, Joss should have put that in...

Love it. Would love to see this as two-shot or more... ;)

DEFINITELY worth it - both the writing and the reading. Nice work.

AAAAH I LOVE IT.