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| Lady Knight Keladry 2008-04-05 ch 31,  | abuseThat was really good, although it would make more sense if you were to switch chapters 26 and 27. You might have mixed them up somehow, seeing as how Colin dies in chapter 26 and then you continue from that scene in chapter 28. Once again, it was really good, if a little angsty. I’m glad you had a happy ending. Thanks for writing!! |
| MarauderetteLily 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseme luves lily and jamsies TOO! awsome shappie! |
| iwascalledrandomyesterday 2007-07-20 ch 31, | abusethis is most amazing story on this i ever read its different and very interesting its your own story mixed with the books its easy to see you could be come an author |
| Sabaku no Miranda 2007-05-16 ch 26, | abuseI'm really sorry 'cause I know this story has been here for some time already but you should know Arabella Figg was NOT a wizard,she was a Squib,so how exactly will she help? |
| warriorprincess27 2006-06-26 ch 21, | abuseUmm... it's a brilliant story until you start repeating everything we've already read about in the third book... couldn't you have just skipped to your own original bits? Lol. Sorry. But yeah, before it got all twisted into Harry's world, it's absolutely awesome! : ) |
| Flame Of Desire 2005-12-30 ch 31, | abuseok so i know this fic is really old but whatever i'm still gonna review cauz i loved it so much! ya it was hella good sad at some parts and all and funny at others but it was awesome! |
| FallenMystery 2005-05-07 ch 17, | abuseOmg, my family is looking at me like i'm mad because i'm sitting here crying. This was SO touching! My favorite flashy was the one where James asks lily to marry him. *aw* |
| FallenMystery 2005-05-07 ch 14, | abuse"Therefore if any man can give any just cause, why they may not lawfully be joined together, let him speak now, or forever hold his peace." "I have a reason!" Sirius exclaimed. "What?" "Naw, I'm just kidding. Go ahead." Revenge of the flaming squirrels! |
| FallenMystery 2005-05-07 ch 12, | abuse*alter ego giggles uncontrollably and uncharacteristically* FLAMING SQUIRRELS RULE! Predictalbe friends rok too... |
| FallenMystery 2005-05-07 ch 11, | abuseI like the flaming squirrels! |
| FallenMystery 2005-05-07 ch 8, | abuseI LOVE the schizophrenic conversations! |
| Theo 2005-05-06 ch 31, anon. | abuseGod I cried so much during the war! Please make a prequel |
| HPprincess23 2004-07-12 ch 31, | abuseGreat story, you did a really good job with it. And I really liked the way you kept Lily and James in there even though they died *sniff sniff* poor Harry. But great job! I really liked it. |
| Emily Hoyt 2004-07-12 ch 31, | abuseMajor cute ending. Liked it a lot. |
| anonymous 2004-06-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseI think you probably should have made this chapter longer and have more stuff happen. Otherwise, I think it's turning into a good story. |