Very well-written! This story is amazing! I like the reflective tone and descriptive language a lot! Awesome job!

The last line killed me. Oh Maglor. Oh my dear Maglor. It's so angsty, but somehow not as sad as it could have been. Bittersweet, I suppose. But the last line is absolute genius. Only I think it should be War 'on', not War 'to' But the idea is just...wow.

This almost made me cry, seriously. Maglor seems like such a sad character, I like how you use that fact to make great stories.

I adore your story gallery.

I like how you keep a certain distance from the emotions here. This is an insightful piece, and I love the star comparison.

I really love this story. I think that the last line reflecs him kind of finally realising how hopeless his quest was, from the beginning to the end.

It's really beautifully written!

Wow, that was really good. It's poignant and thoughtful. Thank you

This is extremely well written! *wipes away a tear* Poor Maglor! It made me want to cry! *sniffles* A wonderful masterpiece! So full of vivid detail and emotion! Thank you for writing this!

Wow.

I love the ending especially. And it says so much in a few words, and he's very in character. Lovely story.

This is *very* good. I've always been fascinated by Maglor, and his fate. We need more Maglor-fics - I promise I'll write one later! ;)

Beautifully written. That last line- wow. An interesting, original pick of Feanor's sons. Very well done.

Well, what can I say but Wow. You wrote this really well. It's very good. Very good indeed.

Oh wow. you know, your prose has the same feel as your poetry... well, yes, I imagine you would know that.

Again, you've captured so perfectly not only Maglor's despair, but the whole feel of Middle-Earth. Very beautiful.

Beautiful!

I'd like to see more Silmarillion based things.

Pretty good. Just a few stylistic things...one thing is, 'flee' is a verb..you probably want to say 'flight' instead.

Glad to see there is another Malgor fan out there. I think you really get into his head, and the ending is right on.