Update soon

please, please, please update again!

Always loved this hilarious story. Being the big Ami/Zoi fan I was sad you never added the next chapter. More so I hated you never finished the interesting story. Wish you could just spend your life writing for all of us.

ha ha are u planning on updating?

AH! This is so amazing! I cannot wait for the next installment! Don't break their hearts again! Oh, the suspence!

UPDATE! I wanna know what happens next. It's such a cool story!

This is good please update.

Good one. Exactly what I needed for my senshi/shitennou cravings. _

*glances around*

Say, uh, planning to finish this anytime soon? ;;

...Or, at least, post that Ami scene you said you have done...

But in anycase, nice work.

this is so good! you just have to finish it!

Again...wonderful goodness (hurray for Zach's healing techniques!) And I hope your week gets better. :(

Keep up the excellent work!

BUT...keep in mind, please... ;

There a place; "We'll meet you THERE" "THERE it is!"

They're They are; "THEY'RE going to meet us at two."

Their possessive of "they"; "They picked up THEIR laundry from the cleaners" "They went to meet THEIR doom."

Thank you for another wonderful chapter _ *goes to read next*

Alrighty! I would just like to say that so far, this has been an excellent read. o I'm about to continue on to Chapter 5 (hurrah! _ ) ...but the ONLY thing that seems to detract from your great character development, plot twists, etc, is your GRAMMAR. You've got several mistakes with words which sound the same but aren't (and only one character name typo). Your story is VERY well written...but it would be so much more pleasurable to read if you fixed these mistakes! _

Good Job!

Chapter Four

" Now wait a minute." Haruku(should be HarukA) snapped back...

" Its are fault to." (should be "It's our..") Hotaru growled.

The Inner Senshi had died many more times than that, and were destined to continue there (should be "their")pace.

In celebration of getting her knew (should be "new") contract

"Apparently are (should be "our") past is coming back to haunt us." Ami said...

Their hair looked like they had died ("dyed") it with cool aid.

Minako felt her hand hit the panic button on her communicator just as the large bolt of energy was thrown there ("their") way.

I love it. I love all of your stories.

PLease update soon! I know you haven't for a while, but please do. I also LOVED the Rei/Jason scene.

I love it! Why have you not updated in such a long time? I want to see Makot and Nephrite. I have an obsession with Makoto. This is different from the usual Gen/Sen stories I read. I love it! Gd-Chan

*whines* Wheres the rest?
I want more from the incredibly talented writer!
MEACH!
Maelgwyn