I eagerly waited for this story and its revelations and I wasn't desappointed. You made me laugh but also cry. The knife attack was unexpected and you've put so much emotion in it and in the aftermaths, just heartbreaking.

Prof. Mc Kenzie is a great character, so funny and intriguing, may be we'll see more from him, perhaps on Atlantis, now that he knows everything?.

And well John Jr, we know for some time now he's special with his double ATA, but wow, I can't wait to see what you've planned for him.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Thank you for this latest non-stop, thrilling installment to your series! Adding a gay character enchanted with the handsome John Sheppard was brilliant. I laughed sooo much :-) The big reveal between John and Moria's dark past was very beautifully written - the emotions were jumping out the page. Baby Johnny's character is becoming very important in the story, as his abilities and influence are slowly being revealed to us. The way that he finally called 'Dada' when Moria was attacked, the way he purposely withholds 'Dada' afterward(LOL), the way he knows that his mother was going to leave and he stopped her, the way he knows when his father is angry - oh yes, Johnny is a big character! The very final scene over his DNA seemed very worrisome.

Thanks for your excellent story! I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment!

LL

What a fabulous story and an absolutely fantastic continuation of this series. I have read every single story and they get more and more addictive... Thank you for feeding my mind!