i'm really enjoying this story. it's probably the most likely (as in in-character, properly paced) post JE story that i've read. please don't let it die! i'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

Hey! I like the story so far. I love the raw emotions of the characters - very fitting for the situation. Definitely keep going with this story, I'd love to see where it goes!

Brilliant! Well-written, concise, entertaining, and heartbreaking. Everyone is perfectly in character and you're really capturing the dilemma of 10.5 very well; the idea that he IS the Doctor and yet most certainly is a different man.

I cannot wait to read more!

Ms. This

Great Chapt! Love how you ended it and really looking forward to reading more.

another great chapter - please continue.

Well, I feel almost bad having read this. It is amazingly well done, but I clearly haven't seen nearly enough Doctor Who to have any idea what's going on. You've made this all seem incredibly interesting though, so I think I'm going to go try to watch the whole series and then come back so I can appreciate this a bit more.

Excellent - I love TenII/Rose stories (in particular the adventure genre) and this has a great beginning. I like the way you wrote Rose - sticking them in the middle of a mystery/adventure is an excellent way to bring the two characters together. Can't wait to read more.

Brilliant :) Can't wait for more! x

No need to panic, that was a really interesting beginning and I'm intrigued by it. I really wonder what's going on in that little town of Julsted and whatever is happening will help bring the Doctor and Rose closer.

good first chapter with a hint of a good story to come. Look forward to reading more.