This may be a waste of time, with the amount of time having passed since an update, but please more! This story is amazing, having been a fan of the Lazer Tag show and a huge fan of Ranma/Nabiki pairings. So if you are still thinking of adding to this story please do so.

Please write more of A starlite in Nerima I want to see more.

Great Scott Marty, talk about a blast from the past. I didn't think anyone remembered that laser tag cartoon show. the story has promise. Though I think you underplayed ranma's reaction to seeing ranko's starlite. Sure he could pass off Ranko as being a looney for the first few moments until she pulls out the starlite. i mean if an inventor suddenly sees an object just like the one he is just about finished creating, wouldn't that shock the hell out him, or enrage the hell out of him? First it is Japan, so the moment someone, let alone a stranger you just met a minute ago, takes out a gun like object during the night, ranma should have been wary. next after seeeing what the gun did he should have been asking ranko where the hell she got that gun from. The fact that ranma dismisses ranko and all she tells him after seeing the starlite in action makes no sense.

A good start to this bet. I'm not familiar with Lazer Tag Academy but it looks pretty interesting. I like how Ranma's life has changied in this. Getting Adopted by his biological parents, being more of a thinker by necessity, being calmer, it's esp interesting because at the core of it he's still Ranma.
I also liked his first meeting with Nabiki and look forward to how his meeting with the rest of the Tendo's goes. Ranko is an interesting character and I like the twist of making her a Star Wars junkie. I look forward to seeing what happens next in this.

You have to contiue this. I want to see how this turns out. Besides, it's a great fic.

Knock knock

More this is a new idea

That was cool......

I usually don't post reviews, but this was freaking cool. Please continue it.

this fic sounds really good. cant wait to read more!

Hmm do not know what to think of it just yet though I do like what you have writen so far.

cool fic have not seen one with this anime yet i rember the cartoon and it was cool cant wait to see more