Nice

Really well written and amazing picture too! ) I gotta say I partly waited for Toboe to attack the sniperist. ;

...Over and out...

AkuDemyfan

Cute. :D Loved it a lot

Great story. I just love Wolf's Rain! Though why did everyone die? :'(

That was really cute!

This story really grabbed at me. I loved it. Your an amazing autor. You might want to think about it as a career.

This was amazing :) I love the end it was so beautiful.

And the fight scenes were awesome :D

awwww so cute! and ur right it was nice to read a non-yaoi peice of the two!_!

Aww! I love it! 3 Not much of a Tsume x Toboe fan, but this was so cute!

Personally, I'm just glad to see awesome little adventure ficlets like this in the fandom. :) (If you're looking for more adventure genfics featuring Tsume, I recall this little fic called "Oblation," but haven't been able to find it lately...)

Fwee! Oh my gosh I loved it . Toboe's so brave. Squee! I want another story xD