I loved this, I loved this a lot! 3 I have nothing more to say - except that describing their curves like that seemed a bit irrelevant. ;D

Anyway, if you decide to write a sequel, I'll be happy to read it!

Tsunaaaaa!

Awww! I loved all of your drabbles until now! *-*

But the "The After Years" was too much tense! D:

They just vanished! ahh! Sad, reeeally sad! Deserve a continuation :9

auhsuahsuashuah

The mainly story was so perfect! *-*

I fell in love with it, so cute both Yamamoto and Haru! Aww! *0*

Pleease, write more! I'll be waiting (;

Kisu's :*

Pretty great chapter! Hope you can update soon

Ciao.

Very nice work! I really appreciate your writing style, for there is a great lack of good writing on this web site. Also, it's good to read something gen.

But there is one thing that I find confusing, and from reading a few of the reviews for this drabble project, I see that I am not alone. You started off with a good story going, but then never finished it, choosing to post drabbles instead. And then you post this as part of your drabble collection, but then post it as a separate story, as well. It doesn't really make a whole lot of sense to me (incidentally, I was the one who added your story to the YamaHaru C2 - there's a whole staff of us. :) ).

It's your writing, so I definitely respect your right to do as you please. However, I think it would have been better organized and less disjointed had you finished posting your original story, keeping it as a one-shot, and then ventured into this drabble project (and then decide whether it is to be solely about YamaHaru or KHR as a whole, because "Smiles" is very much a gen piece - or both, but the current summary is misleading for some). I also happen to think "Smiles" is fine as a one-shot by itself, apart from the rest of the other drabbles.

Anyway, it's just a suggestion. I will now go and leave a review at the other "Smiles" piece you posted. Keep up the good work!

Awwwwwwwwwwwww...

it's so sad...

To think that they all vanished... I hope they're having a happy life somewhere.

Oh well, great job!

* looking forward to the next chapter* :)

Confused about this chapter... x

Yay! Good chapter! Cute Yamaharu!

Sorry I'm late to review...but :)

Hurry it up.. Please

Aw this was really nice. Although I have to disagree about something. Yamamoto isn't handsome in an ordinary way; he's handsome in an extraordinary way! He's too handsome! He's the best looking guardian! Anyway good job on the story! I really liked reading it, please update soon

Nice and sweet chapter xDD

update :D

Nice and sweet chapter xDD

update :D

Yay! a drabble! sad one but well done, it's good! i'm gonna wait now for star gazing :D

i know you didn't intend to...but u definitely tormented me with this chapter :p i was soooo excited and a little unsure when i saw another chapter updated...but it's still a drabble so i'll forgive you :D! this was sad, poor haru...and yamamoto! good work!

Awww Haru! I feel sorry for her and poor Yamamoto! He cannot die! Nice drabble!