this is ne of my favirite boks!

Your story is amazing! I wish you had written a sequel, but it seems you didn't (at least not from looking through your other stories)

I'm going to read your other DBZ stories now. They all seem to be Gohan centric (which I LOVE!) and I can't wait!

Your story is so intriguing and so sad. I cried a few times... lol

Never loose your fun in writing :-)

Mariko

woah, you're good! Awesome story!

I was hesitant to read this fic at first, but then I decided to give it a go and…wow. Spectacular. Bravo. It’s a shame that you seem to have fallen out of the DBZ groove, as you are an excellent author. I would have loved to see the sequel to this, but it appears that you won’t be writing one—darn, and the preview was so intriguing too.

Well, I’ll check your profile every once in a while, just to see if you change your mind. Bravo again, and I hope to read more.

Cheers,

Madm_05

This story was beautiful and unique; a epic fic like this deserves to be recognized by anyone!

OMG! that was amazing and it's only the first chapter! OMG I have 28 amazing chapters like that left to read!

wow this story really is written well. I'm glad u have so many reiviews

I find few stories that are as indescribable as this one!

I love it how Xeia kissed Gohan and wow did Gohan go through a lot of Angst!

I love ur ending tho. I'm going to read the forgotten shades of red now :)

i love this story! I read the whole thing, i just came bak to chapter 1 to review tho.

this is an amazing read!

I love the character Xeia!

i have read this story before but i love coming bk to this chapter. i love the... hmm... 'bond' between Vegeta and Gohan. best chappy ever. o yeah.

aww... how sweet

One word can only sum up this work: GREAT! I wanted to save whatever review I had for the end. It was great. Keep up the work.

She...

She kissed him!

Poor Gohan!

You are the best DBZ writter ever!

I cannot find a single thing to critisize and your ideas were genius. It was indescribale! Looking foreward to read the sequel

love it

Wow, that was one long, but awesome fanfiction. *blinks* If I were to list everything I loved here, I would take up your entire screen. Some of the phrases were said with such inctricacy that I could almost imagine te knotwork behing each syllable. Keep that up; it is what makes your story so unique! :)

Like I mentioned before, the use of words are very nice, along with a couple choice vocabulary words. It made a very interesting combination. Also, I like how you chose Krillen, Vegeta, and Gohan as your main characters, because Krillen is usually forgotten or useless in most fanfics, and it's very nice to see a Gohan/Vegeta fic that ISN'T yaoi... I applaud you in this ficcy.

Just onee thing. I nkow I haven't read the sequel (which I will do shortly), but I didn't get the ending, where Gohan finally ends Xiea. Also, the dragonball thing was kinda vague. Maybe you could clarify this, or will it be explained in the sequel?

Otherwise, this is truly very very nice. It was a great fic to read, and I enjoyed it. Keep up the great writing.

Xie xie ni,

Sa*ya Xiao Jie

great chapter now taht ther is no won left after the battle is over what will gohan do.