 Grizzo 12/7/11 . chapter 3Just loved this. Going to write anymore..please...thx...gr |
 Keepthemagicandanomliessecret 10/30/11 . chapter 3 Really good story |
 TidusGT 5/3/11 . chapter 3the story is good please upload soon! |
 Ichigo'sDragon 1/27/11 . chapter 3Please continue this story! |
 Ichigo'sDragon 1/27/11 . chapter 2they are cute sissies! |
 Ichigo'sDragon 1/27/11 . chapter 1Pure Pure awesomeness |
 love-of-my-existance 1/13/11 . chapter 1I really like this story but you really have to go over it and edit for grammatical errors. Near the end you wrote ''post cordial'' (cordial being a drink) instead of post coital (even tho don't trust my spelling on that one Haha) which means after orgasm. Just thought you should know, keep up the good work. |
 Shere'Lifsil 10/31/10 . chapter 3Awesome chapter, totally cool, I loved it, and it was very exciting. I wish you luck with your NaNoWriMo and hope you'll update when you have the time. |
 justlistening 10/28/10 . chapter 3I would love to see more Adopted!Mordred in later fics, it's a great concept.
I like the story so far, very intriguing.
My creative writing class had to write a novel, but we used the entire month of October instead of November(NaOctWriMo?). So our time is almost up! It's a great experience though, I loved it.
Good luck on your novel and please update soon! |
 Shere'Lifsil 10/27/10 . chapter 2This was another Awesome chapter, I liked it a lot, Arthur and Merlin are so cute together. I think I like Mordred not being a bad guy as well.
It's an awesome story and I hope you'll continue it. |
 MirrorFlower and DarkWind 10/25/10 . chapter 3awsome job and good luck with nanowrimo |
 socalrose 10/25/10 . chapter 3Great chapter! Good luck with NaNoWriMo! |
 Shere'Lifsil 10/12/10 . chapter 1Great, absolutely wonderful, Yup, totally loved it. It was very interesting, well built and awesomely written. Yup we liked it, like, a LOT. |
 WeAreHisTeenageDream 10/10/10 . chapter 2Like like Like Like Like.
Sorry I'm Joking.
I LOVED THIS :D More Please? |
 socalrose 10/4/10 . chapter 2Great chapter - thanks! |