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Grizzo 12/7/11 . chapter 3
Just loved this. Going to write anymore..please...thx...gr
Keepthemagicandanomliessecret 10/30/11 . chapter 3
Really good story
TidusGT 5/3/11 . chapter 3
the story is good please upload soon!
Ichigo'sDragon 1/27/11 . chapter 3
Please continue this story!
Ichigo'sDragon 1/27/11 . chapter 2
they are cute sissies!
Ichigo'sDragon 1/27/11 . chapter 1
Pure Pure awesomeness
love-of-my-existance 1/13/11 . chapter 1
I really like this story but you really have to go over it and edit for grammatical errors. Near the end you wrote ''post cordial'' (cordial being a drink) instead of post coital (even tho don't trust my spelling on that one Haha) which means after orgasm. Just thought you should know, keep up the good work.
Shere'Lifsil 10/31/10 . chapter 3
Awesome chapter, totally cool, I loved it, and it was very exciting. I wish you luck with your NaNoWriMo and hope you'll update when you have the time.
justlistening 10/28/10 . chapter 3
I would love to see more Adopted!Mordred in later fics, it's a great concept.

I like the story so far, very intriguing.

My creative writing class had to write a novel, but we used the entire month of October instead of November(NaOctWriMo?). So our time is almost up! It's a great experience though, I loved it.

Good luck on your novel and please update soon!
Shere'Lifsil 10/27/10 . chapter 2
This was another Awesome chapter, I liked it a lot, Arthur and Merlin are so cute together. I think I like Mordred not being a bad guy as well.

It's an awesome story and I hope you'll continue it.
MirrorFlower and DarkWind 10/25/10 . chapter 3
awsome job and good luck with nanowrimo
socalrose 10/25/10 . chapter 3
Great chapter! Good luck with NaNoWriMo!
Shere'Lifsil 10/12/10 . chapter 1
Great, absolutely wonderful, Yup, totally loved it. It was very interesting, well built and awesomely written. Yup we liked it, like, a LOT.
WeAreHisTeenageDream 10/10/10 . chapter 2
Like like Like Like Like.

Sorry I'm Joking.

I LOVED THIS :D More Please?
socalrose 10/4/10 . chapter 2
Great chapter - thanks!
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