 Casey Greene 4/5/02 . chapter 1Awww... Poor Xander. I do like him so. This is a really sweet fic, and for someone who claims that English is not her primary language, you have a better grasp of it than some stories I've read by so-called "native speakers". And don't worry about making mistakes, only the creepy obsessive-compulsive people really care, and those people are boring anyways. Good job, I hope to see more! |
 Supergirl 55 3/3/02 . chapter 1it ws pretty good. more or less believable. good buffy-angst, & t/ part about willow sounded pretty xander-like. dunno about t/ cordy part tho. maybe i'm sayin this because i'm a major c/x shipper when it comes 2 t/ 1-st 3 seasons, but i really do think there ws mo between them then just him using her as a buffy substitute. i even think he liked cordy mo then he did anya, 4 a large part of the x/a relationship. i mean i know he's all in love w/ her now... but i'm really getting off topic
anyway, t/ way xander ws w/ cordy in "bewitched, bothered, and bewildered", or even t/ way he was in "innocence", i should think that he *did* have feelings 4 her. not 2 say that he wasn't still in love w/ buffy t/ whole time, like he is even now, but still... |