Great 3

Ah, the New Yorker who's close to being exactly like his father. "I'm the herooooo". I love all your stories. They're all so precise, yet flowing. Keep it up. c:

(Why didn't you tell me you posted something? You looney! You're giving me mor reviews than I know what to do with and you don't even yell at me when I don't read yours! EUGH. But I'll get caught up. You naughty toast.)

Ahem. Anyway. I love your dialogue here. c: Great job! this story was just generally touching. And the fact that they didn't speak so formally and with accents and all that made it a lot more tangible.

(I hope to see more chapters of this, but I understand if it's a one-shot. I find it rediuclously hard to write war stories.)