|Reviews for Keeping Secrets|
| readingrox101 8/10/11 . chapter 1
Absolutely no punctuation. Couldn't you have put a comma in somewhere? I didn't understand that last part, anyway...
| The Agent Of Insanity 12/14/10 . chapter 1
interesting little poem you got here...I kinda like it but...it's kinda short. Do you think you could make it bigger? Then It would rock my socks off I'm sure!...
| music4evah 10/16/10 . chapter 1
Dude. USE. SOME. PUNCTUATION. Why did you capitalize 'Secret' out of no where?
DON'T. EVER. USE. CHAT. SPEAK.
Just... Just STOP. Your writing can hardly even be called that. This is all just one huge run-on sentence with hardly any grammar at all! If you WANTED this to be a poem, you would have to split it into separate stanzas!
And AGAIN, why the bold face? It just makes it harder to read.