oh, please go on writing. this is such a good story, I loved to read it till now and would love to read more.

please go on - don't stop it!

.gaudio

You ever gonna finish this? It's too good to leave here.

You ever gonna finish this? Or was it a waste of my time reading all 8 chapters?

Oh. This is such a realistic fic, and I think you've done brilliantly in keeping Max's character consistent.
Much as I like this story, I would like it EVEN MORE if you could come up with another chapter. Just enough to have Max get to know Logan better (again).
Carry on, carry on!
Isn't it great when I make sense in my reviews? Yeah, I'll shut up now.

Please some more this is a great story really want to know how logans going to explain this one away he has another chance he better not blow it
Think OC better step up soon and sort them out

OK...so when are you going to finish this? There's such a shortage of decent DA fics these days, that I'm crying out for more. C'mon Moonshadow...help me out here, please?

hey there cant leave it at that i was just getting into it

maggieann

This is a really original story. Your writing has an incredible flair to it which kept me reading and you have really captured the essence of Logan's personality. I really hope you update this soon!

Cate

Please finish this sometime soon! it's such a great story.

I just wanna let you know that, out there, in a distant place, there are people still waiting that you continue this story. Please?

J

Thought the story was very good but left you hanging. Really needs an ending to it. Please finish!

Please finish this story, I beg you! I keep checking for an update and still no joy. It's just such an original idea and I can't wait to see how Max will react when she knows the truth. Please put me out of my misery.

Ann

it was great write more!

love M/L fics

Oh! This is o, good, the best fic on the fan fic pages. And what a cliff hanger, I can;t wait to see how Logan get's through telling Max Why Zack hates his guts. Will he tell her thre whole story? Does he realise the whole story?

I am so looking forward to the next installment.

-):

I really like the way Max follows Logan into his garage, looks around, and evaluates the signs of damage on the car and the walls. I wasn't expecting her to do that, and it was cool. It's also a nice touch to have Logan realize she used to know right where to go, and lament the loss of that closeness.

"Max rode slowly behind him, checking out the garage. Probably looking for my secret underground lair, Logan told himself."

-LOL

"He didn't like keeping Eyes Only a secret."

-I would add "from her" to the end of that sentence, seeing as how Logan has no problem keeping EO a secret from everyone else.

Woo-hoo, Max remembers something! I can just imagine how that got Logan's pulse racing in hope. :)

Hee...I can just imagine Max's shock when she hears that she and the others collaborated with Lydecker.

Keep the chapters coming!