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   andyg2525 6/3/13 . chapter 10who adopted the story I need to now |
| Guest 2/22/13 . chapter 9 There are 3 versions of 1 story? To The Past, Full Circle And Full Circle But No one has fished it? |
| Guest 2/20/13 . chapter 1 Dodes', the story is D.E.A.D QOTE: Full Circle - DEAD Summery - A monster and the DinoThunder Rangers have been sent into the past by a new weapon of mesogog's, a past which for Tommy wasn't too long ago. Can Tommy save the past and future without giving his identity away? Ninjetti Chapter - 9 |
| Guest 12/11/12 . chapter 9 PLease continue this story it's been quite a wile since the last update. Like some long years |
| Cacao85 10/7/12 . chapter 9 nice chapter! for when the new chapter? |
| Guest 7/21/12 . chapter 9 Are you Ever.. going to update? |
| Guest-Saz 7/17/12 . chapter 9 This is really good! I read this a wile ago. Really goooooooood! PLEASE, KEEP, TYPING! PLEASE! thanks. BTW... I think this is really good. |
| Chris Atola 6/9/12 . chapter 9 You might want to fix the formatting on this chapter: it's a bit hard to keep track of who's saying what when you have several people's dialogue in the same paragraph. One way to ensure your formatting stays correct is to hit Enter twice between paragraphs, instead of only once. Don't rely on the 'Add Space Before Paragraph' function of some word processors, as that function doesn't really seem to carry over to the FF-net document manager. You should also remember to capitalise the first letter of a new sentence, including in lines of dialogue. Don't end a quote with a period if you plan to add a 'said so-and-so' type ending. Like so: " It looked kind of like a cross between a thermal image and a topography map showing a mostly even blue-green color, but this changed as Hayley zoomed in on the soccer field. Over the space of about 10 yards the colors went from blue-green to dark blue then purple and finally black. "Well it's more then we had," said Hayley with a grin. Trent just looked confused, unable to make any sense out of the map. "OK, but what is it?" he asked. "Simple, it's time," she answered, grinning. " (I also fixed a couple of other, miscellaneous mistakes in the above.) Could you possibly ask a friend who's good at spotting mistakes in writing, or an English teacher, to proofread for you? Word's (or some other program's) grammar check would be a start, but those never catch everything. Perhaps you could find a beta-reader using the link at the top of the FF-net page? If you're really desperate for a beta and can't get anybody from FF-net, please let me know: I'd be happy to proofread a fic or two for you. Best regards, Christina Atola |
| Sunny Lighter 10/4/11 . chapter 9 Can't wait for more |
| Lmb111514 8/4/11 . chapter 9 This is amazing, please please please write the next chapter soon! |
| Guardiansaiyan from Youtube 6/6/11 . chapter 9 PLEASE Update! I want to see Tommy found out by Alpha 5 and Zordon! Preferably without endangering his existence... _ |
| Guest 3/2/11 . chapter 9 This is really good! |
| kyuuo 11/9/10 . chapter 9 super idea will others come to the past and will the ninjieti find out about dr.o looking forward to the next chapter ps i like 'back in action' and 'black ligth' too-will you update them soon |
| Frog1 10/12/10 . chapter 9 Very good chapter! But, I bit short...I am glad to see this story updated though! |
| Asian95 10/5/10 . chapter 9 interesting story. I wonder what how much drama it'll cause if the MMPR find out the identities of the DinoThunder rangers. Update soon!xD |
