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Banana Co 5/12/02 . chapter 1
OMG, I feel stupid. Or maybe its just late. Anyways, I was all prepared for Dib to just leap off the roof untill I got to about the third page and I found out he was going to *chase* Zim. Shame! Leading me on to believe there was going to be heavy angst with poor Dibby, and then you go and add an ingenious twist that no one except your ..uh..genious, could ever have conjured up! hehe..damyu.

The end was where I got to feeling stupid. I was like"...huh..? Man..i got to lay off these PB n' chocolate oreos...the end of the fic elludes me! argh! i stab my head!" No..j/k! I figured it out soon enough, and it was PERFECT. You definetly have the knack for original story telling and vivid imagery in all your fics. Of course, I've said this all before, but everyone loves hearing their work praised, no? _. You deserve it, anyways! Im sure Idgiebay was ecstatic about it too!

You know what I try to go for when I write a fic? What the perosn reading it is going to feel. If I want angst, i try to make the reader feel as sorry and tender for the character as possible. That what hooks people when reading a fic. And this fic definetly fulfills that! The language works so perfectly and flows so smoothly that the reader is intensly absorbed in Dib's feelings. If you can write well enough to cuase someone to feel angst over an IZ fic, theres no telling what damage you're capable of in a real literary setting!

Verdi _v
anime z0mbie 4/18/02 . chapter 1
*trys to type near tears* I'm at somewhat of a loss for words... This fic was just so beautiful... There's no other word to describe it. Wonderful job!
Mirage DeDreamer 3/6/02 . chapter 1
No time to read it all but it's great as usual! I look forward to seeing the rest!
OpalescentTear 3/4/02 . chapter 1
Wow, I loved it (as usual)!

You sent it to me before, but I really wanted to review this.

I love your way of describing things, and you're really good at getting inside a character's head.

Lucky Idgiebay, she got a great fanfic dedicated to her .
CryingChild 3/4/02 . chapter 1
God... just beyond beautiful...
Black Silver i'm just to damn lazy to log on 3/3/02 . chapter 1
UMMM that's kind of word-y and hard to follow, but what do i know. It seems like a good story, I was reading the summary and i'm thinking, OMG are you gonna kill my Dibby ( the first and last enemy thing makes it seem like thar
Maniacal Dragon 3/3/02 . chapter 1
This is a really awesome story! Kind of sad at the end.. I think I know what happened. Yes.. I can tell what happened. Poor Dib.. following Zim to the end in any way he can. I doubt those two will ever untangle from each other.
InvaderXelith 3/3/02 . chapter 1
This was absolutley beautiful. The only thing I don't understand is how Dib died.
Ztarlight 3/3/02 . chapter 1
Oh my Tallest... Amethyst, that was beautiful! if I could write half as good as you could I'd... I'd... I'd do something. Point being, it's another wonderful work to add to your already masterful gallery. :)
Diesel 3/2/02 . chapter 1
Thanks for giving me the chance to beta this. I told you that Idgie would love it! You're very talented, and I know that you're going to go a long long way. PS - Sorry about that mushy e-mail review for the beta. XD
Idgiebay 3/2/02 . chapter 1
I have no clue what to say. That was just so beautiful.. Thank you so, so much. I'm truly at a loss for words. Such wonderful imagery.. and.. just everything. You are so talented.. Thank you. *HUGS*
Penguin-Major Nora 3/2/02 . chapter 1
Wow! Very good, I like it!
until strawberry sherbert 3/2/02 . chapter 1
Hmmm... maybe I should draw a picture D wow... very, very good... dark thoughts are good things, aren't they? Very sad... angsty stuff is what you're best at.
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