|Reviews for Bittersweet|
| HOT 4/25/13 . chapter 1
OMG this story was so cute and sexy
please do another chapter !
| Ella 2/24/13 . chapter 1
wow it was so cute :3
i love them both!
| Jannasaur 2/5/12 . chapter 1
The use of the word 'buttnaked' made me giggle! xD
Apart from that interjection of laughter, this story was pretty sexy... As soon as I watched NaPolA, the chemistry and connection between both Friedrich and Albecht is clearly there! And for scenes such as these to be injected somewhere in my imagination is wonderful, for now my mind has something very clear to think about when Friedrich visits Albrecht's home. :D I too have been writing a short story about this particular visit.
I liked your way of writing, though at some points in the story I wondered whether your first language isn't English? I apologize if this offends you in any way, but there were a few errors and times in the writing that were iffy, or didn't make any sense. But once it got to the more sexy stuff, it seemed to get better. :)
Finally, I enjoyed this fic, and it was a nice short story for me to think about the next time I watch NaPolA. I hope you write more!