This story is truly amazing. ;)I'm an avid reader, and I did catch a few things that were familiar, but in my opinion it was everything was original in its own way. I expected something ENTIRELY different with the plot so far and it caught me off guard so it interested me on wanting to read more. Though I do believe it is a little fast paced, but then I read more and it made perfect sense. Keep it up I look forward for more.

Awesome job ;)

IS this off Daniel X by James Patterson? Because he uses the same superpower you do in your story...