not to be harsh, but you cood imperoov yor fics by updaiting. I like them boelth.

Very nice, it was kinda slow at the begining but towards the end it was really good,

the characters were good too, I hope you write more soon i hate being left hanging _

Sharon

good content, nice fluidity, written easy enough for most to understand writers objectives. i give it a B

I read this story back when it wasn't this far. It seemed much better before but that would most likely be because of it being my second time. You've always had a niche for writing stories based upon other stories or even just a few little tidbits. I'll be waiting for the rest but just try and make sure your character spelling is correct ( I can't even spell some of those Gundam character's names sometimes. )

Good luck,

Will

I don't exactly like Wing(I much prefer UC Gundam), but... wow. Nice job.

You had me read this before. As a friend I said it was great but you said to be brutally honest so here goes...

It was great... No really man. You've got the characters personalities down great. I don't remember much detail about Gundam Wing though and some parts I had trouble remembering. (Mostly the part about Heero in Endless Waltz) You need a little more detail but not too much. You've already got enough to the point it's really enjoyable. I myself really didn't feel like reading but I decided to anyway. I was glad I did. I want you to work on more and don't let anything bad slow you down. I want to hear more in this tale and if you leave me hanging.. I'll kill you.. lol Just kidding btw. But I'll be pretty upset.

Hope to see more

Your Friend

Adam

The concept's got me intruiged about the rest. Good job, can't wait for more _