Beautiful story!

This was beautiful!

I loooved it!

this has been sitting in my box for I don't know how long. Finally...and so worth it.

I have a weakness for dark realistic E's.

And the structure of the story was glimpses into lives that mesh.

Thanks, sorry it took me so long.

Wow, just wow! That is all. Thank you. -Erin

a "real" life not flowerly bullshit story - really liked it

but didnt understand why he pulled his own teeth out

This was unique and refreshing.

thank you for writing.

This was lovely! Well, yeah, stories about addicts are never "lovely", but you know what I mean. The way you told the story was lovely. What a unique way of doing it, made it a really interesting read.

Thank you so much for sharing.

This really is a beautiful piece with all the harsh reality put into awesome words. The storybuilding is as real as it gets, the descriptions lovely and very fitting, the switch of characters, the way we see the time passing and the story flow. It is a very good one shot. well done. loved it

Bittersweet and yet hopeful. Very nice.

Beautiful and hope inspiring, thank you!

This is great! Thanks for writing and sharing!

You really managed to capture the pain and torture that is addiction, not only for the addict but for those that love him/her as well. I am glad you didn't tie a big bow and present an automatic HEA because while its heading that way, like Edward said, every day will be a struggle for him. Well done, great job.

I really liked this, specially the way you told the story from four different points of view.

very nice! And I adore this pairing :) It works and is believable. You get a lot said in a short piece.

loved the telling of this. Your writing is so well done.