Kaito and Shinichi are related, eh? I knew it! They're too alike not to be! But what about the black and red KID-like outfit in the trunk? Did Yuusaku and Touichi work together?

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EPIC. I can't wait for the rest~! :D

Really though, this is pretty darned good--especially compared to some of the other fan works out there for Conan. Keep it up!

I suppose that, since this hasn't been updated in almost six years, this will remain uncompleted. It is, however, a really nice story, and I would love to know where it ends. I wish to thank you for such a long, enjoyable work.

LOVE THIS STORY! And the idea of them being cousins makes so much sense, and I love how you portray Kaito when he's thinking about Aoko and, and, I JUST LOVE THIS! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Wow, finally a murder mystery~! I can't wait to see what will happen! And I really hope you will keep on writing and finish this fic one day. I think it's beautifully and skillfully written. I've enjoyed every single chapter and I'd love if you finished this. So please update!
...I'd give you a bunch of virtual cookies, but I think Kaito ate them...
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~Huilisti <3

A great chapter again! Nothing more to say now, continuing to the next chapter~!

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"Wow, now this is something," he continued brightly, turning the item over in his hands. It was slim, made of silvery-grray metal and shaped like a large pocketknife.

--just a small typo there, 'grray' should be gray. :D

--what? Shinichi, a niichan?! Well THAT was totally unexpected! But I don't mind it, though. :D The sudden breakup with Yusaku and Yukiko was also quite surprising - I've always though that Yusaku is not that stern or easily upset. But on the other hand, not much is told about him and I kind of like your version of him too.
But I'll keep on reading now and continue enjoying the great story. Thanks a lot for writing so well, keep up the great work!

~Huilisti

Awesome! Great and beautifully written! I just must keep on reading and reading..! Keep up the superb work! Sorry, no time to write more, must read on! <3 :D

Wow, this is an interesting beginning! It's always nice to read fics from Kaito's POV. :D I'll definitely keep on reading and see what'll happen!

~Huilisti <3

What the hell...I can't even put to words...what the hell.

You know, I was putting up with the ever-weepy Shinichi and the ** Yuusaku because the writing was good and the story was interesting. But seriously...WTF?!?! Yukiko having another baby?! That is just too ridiculous for this reader. There is nothing I hate more than ridiculous and unnecessary pregnancy stories.

Though, now that I have officially stopped reading, I feel okay to point this out: In 13 years and 500+ episodes of DC, have you ever seen Shinichi cry once? NO. You have him crying ENTIRELY too much, and it is really out of character for him to cry as much as he has in this story. If you are going to take characters from someone else and use them, then pay them their proper respect and keep them in character as much as possible.

This made me laugh like HECK!
Classic. Just... that's all I can say, really.
Y'know, people were actually STARING at me. It was a bad idea to read fanfic in a public area.
*smirk* I still can't stop snickering at that last bit...
Anyway, I love your writing style!

are you continuing this? I hope so

Hi there :D
a long time ago I've read it and just now found it again
anyway good story and really rare one at that
do your best

Great fic! What happens next? Update soon please!

i, like the loyal fan-fiction reader like i am, will await the day that you complete this story no matter how long it takes. so please dont make me cry by discontinuing it