This is wonderful! :) I really enjoyed your take on Dean’s feelings. It’s a perfect extension of the episode.

“Although, he had trusted that Sam was in Hell. And, although he hadn't talked to Bobby in a year, he had trusted that Bobby would at least let him know something big had come up. Literally.”

Great line! I was very upset with Sam and Bobby, even if they had “good intentions.” I really like your pun in that sentence though, lol.

“He didn't trust his cousins. Or whoever they claimed they were. Something about them rubbed him the wrong way. It wasn't anything he could put his finger on. After all, they were hunting royalty. He was just a distant cousin to them. An imposter in the court of a king.”

Wonderfully put! I don’t trust them either. Something is off. It’s too convenient.

“Even if they weren't exactly Dean's bottle of beer, at least Sam hooked up with family.”

That’s such a Dean thought, lol. :)

“He wondered if he would ever hear from Sam again. At least, he was still alive.

Because Dean had half a mind to hunt him down and kill him for keeping that fact from him for a year.”

I really like how you ended the fic! I think you captured Dean’s thoughts perfectly. I enjoyed the episode, though I agree with you, something did definitely feel off. I can’t help wondering if it’s intentional. One thing I noticed was that this episode inspired me with plot bunnies, something that was pretty rare last year where SN was concerned. (I just wish I had the time to write, lol!)

Great work as always! :)

Ani-maniac494

You know, the premiere felt worng to me as well. I just didn't like the whole feel of it. I hope the rest of the season picks up a bit. Still, this was a good story for it!

Liked Dean's internal thoughts on this. Oh, the boys are so broken and lost. This was a nice one. Thanks.

I liked it, what are you talking about? I can so image dean thinking of this.

Yeah, I hate the Sam-didn't-tell-Dean-he-was-out-of-Hell-thing, too. It feels wrong, and OOC.

Nice tag, though! ;-D

Actually your story is very good, for me, because it's exactly how I felt about the Premiere.

I really don't trust Sam and this Campbell clan who comes out of nowhere.

I'm glad Dean decided to stay with Lisa and Ben. :)

And I can't wait for the punch that Sam really deserve!

I can understand Bobby's reason but I'm not forgiving Sam.

So your story was perfect for me, reassure me that I'm not the only one who felt that way. :)

I too wasn't very excited by the premiere, especially from a Sam!girl perspective.

It's like, oh great, here's Sam, who's supposed to be the smart one, getting fooled and used again. It's becoming repetitive.

3 the boys... fix them, dammit!

/rant off