|Reviews for Homefront|
| Melmel Phase 3/26/12 . chapter 1
Hey! I haven't read this yet but I just wanted to tell you that I JUST got done reading "A Getaway" and was plotting your death cuz you ended it like that but once I saw this a literally squealed. XD my mom officially knows I'm crazy now. Kay! I'm gonna read this now! So uber excited! 3
| Vulpixi Misa 5/31/11 . chapter 6
I... I... Ow, that really hurt my chest. I wish my sister didn't randomly come up and start asking random questions because this chapter was intense. I could feel my heart hurting and it was just a really good mood and I think I'm going to squeal now because I love the way you write Paul. Ah... run on sentence, sorry about that. But really, I mean it, I love this. I can't believe I didn't read this sooner. Everyone was incredibly in character, especially Ash. And Deliah! I love mom now! Even though I'm not big on Palletshipping, the last chapter was so sweet.
Now I'm going to sit here and wait for the sequel.
| Ale and 3/22/11 . chapter 3
What happened to pikachu? I like the story too.
| Shadow Kitsune67 1/24/11 . chapter 6
Lol that was adorable. I am a diehard Palletshipper, but I love Comashipping as well. (: I got into the 'yaoi' aspect of this fandom when Gary was still Ash's main rival so yeah xD I look forward to the epilogue
| miyako356 1/8/11 . chapter 1
of course spanner is awesome :D
| donnabella2k7 1/1/11 . chapter 3
Oh, I wanna know wat happened to pikachu!
| OutlawedFallenAngel 12/27/10 . chapter 3
what happend to pikachu!
| Sasu-Sama' Sarukiji-Sempai 11/28/10 . chapter 6
Yay! I love it!
| Sasu-Sama' Sarukiji-Sempai 11/27/10 . chapter 3
Ash's mom is mad crazy!
| Sasu-Sama' Sarukiji-Sempai 11/27/10 . chapter 2
I like it! _
| cristalcat101 11/2/10 . chapter 5
Still loving this chapter, though I am wondering where Gary is and where Ms. Ketchum goes to CX
| Pratik Roy 10/26/10 . chapter 4
hey man it's been a while when you are gonna post a chapter. it's really nice to see even it is about lovetriangle between three boys but it's still fun to read. please please write the next chapter.
| kiba-dark 10/12/10 . chapter 4
It was very nice,
Ash is very angry with Gary, but it was nice as gary apologize.
on this chapter I liked a lot, if it
in this you expressed very well the feelings of ash.
I like very much but palletshipping
I prefer more the comashipping, so different than Paul and Ash
they are opposites that pleases me greatly
goodbye, I hope you continue soon with more chapters and sorry for not commenting earlier.
| kawai 10/10/10 . chapter 3
Thanks for another chapter to follow.
Paul as a breeder? I guess his brother is a good keeper but could happen with your character and it makes me a little hard to imagine it.
I look forward to the next chapter when you put it I hope to read
| kiba-dark 10/8/10 . chapter 1
the continuation that is already good
will happen in the next chapter?