Hey! I haven't read this yet but I just wanted to tell you that I JUST got done reading "A Getaway" and was plotting your death cuz you ended it like that but once I saw this a literally squealed. XD my mom officially knows I'm crazy now. Kay! I'm gonna read this now! So uber excited! 3

I... I... Ow, that really hurt my chest. I wish my sister didn't randomly come up and start asking random questions because this chapter was intense. I could feel my heart hurting and it was just a really good mood and I think I'm going to squeal now because I love the way you write Paul. Ah... run on sentence, sorry about that. But really, I mean it, I love this. I can't believe I didn't read this sooner. Everyone was incredibly in character, especially Ash. And Deliah! I love mom now! Even though I'm not big on Palletshipping, the last chapter was so sweet.

Now I'm going to sit here and wait for the sequel.

What happened to pikachu? I like the story too.

Lol that was adorable. I am a diehard Palletshipper, but I love Comashipping as well. (: I got into the 'yaoi' aspect of this fandom when Gary was still Ash's main rival so yeah xD I look forward to the epilogue

of course spanner is awesome :D

Oh, I wanna know wat happened to pikachu!

what happend to pikachu!

Yay! I love it!

Ash's mom is mad crazy!

I like it! _

Still loving this chapter, though I am wondering where Gary is and where Ms. Ketchum goes to CX

hey man it's been a while when you are gonna post a chapter. it's really nice to see even it is about lovetriangle between three boys but it's still fun to read. please please write the next chapter.

It was very nice,

Ash is very angry with Gary, but it was nice as gary apologize.

on this chapter I liked a lot, if it

was short,

in this you expressed very well the feelings of ash.

I like very much but palletshipping

I prefer more the comashipping, so different than Paul and Ash

they are opposites that pleases me greatly

goodbye, I hope you continue soon with more chapters and sorry for not commenting earlier.

Thanks for another chapter to follow.

Paul as a breeder? I guess his brother is a good keeper but could happen with your character and it makes me a little hard to imagine it.

I look forward to the next chapter when you put it I hope to read

the continuation that is already good

will happen in the next chapter?