 Alexis Night 4/10/12 . chapter 1Wow! Did Batman think the Network kidnapped poor little Dick? Man, they woulda been screwed if Fingers didn't straighten it up.
There are not words for how fucked up Mikey and Tommy are. Oh my god. Poor Dick. It's a good think Batman got there when he did. I don't even want to think about what would've happened if he didn't. Bruce, putting the ownedge on the social services lady. ABOUT TIME! Hurray for happy endings! This was such a great story! |
 PJ Zatken 1/18/12 . chapter 1Amazing story, Syl! Many many thanks for writing this gem :) |
 talk-ape 11/28/11 . chapter 1fantastic! |
 OhtarIstar666 9/13/11 . chapter 1So I really enjoyed this fic! My only issue was when Fingers medical status from his fight at juvie was stated, you said BP eighty over one-twenty which isn't possible... at all. I know this is really nit picky and I am sorry. 120/80 is correct (and the "correct" BP to have). In this situation, he'd probably have something like 100/70. Anyway, I really like the ending when Fingers and his buddies helped Bruce find Dick. The entire fic was really sweet. |
 Kopy Kat 3/24/10 . chapter 1Wow! I was crying at the end because it was so happy! That isn't what happened in the comic books but I think you should call DC and ask them to change it. This is better. Great job! You did the characters great, I loved the OC's and... just amazing! Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent!
Great job!
Kopy Kat |
 MathCamel 8/21/08 . chapter 1 Dude, I've been mainlinling Dick Grayson fanfic lately, and I feel comfortable saying this is one of the best I've ever read. Not just in Bat-family, but in all the fandom's I've ever enjoyed. I LOVE this fic.
I'm off to see if you have any other DG fic, and I promise I will review faithfully (which I'm notoriously too lazy to do.)
TL;DR - You rock like Granite. |
 WindStar 1/23/08 . chapter 1absolutely fan-freaking-tastic |
 Pumpkin 2/4/07 . chapter 1 Once again one of the best stories I have ever read. If I have a friend I would like to tell them about you. Keep up the good work. |
 Creative Spark 1/26/07 . chapter 1Aw I was almost crying in some parts. This is wondeful work. Please keep writing. :D
-Creative Spark |
 DragonUk 4/22/06 . chapter 1Aw, how sweet :) Luffed the fic :)
Dragon |
 Zarz 7/27/05 . chapter 1I really love your story. Of course, I really hate what Dick had to go through, but you have a really great style of writing, that really tugs at one's heartstrings! I can't imagine anyone being so cruel as to do that to a kid, yet the whole situation is so plausable as to be downright terrifying. Please tell me that doesn't happen in real life or I'll never be able to sleep again! Anyway, besides that little issue, all of the interactions between the characters, and everything that Dick managed to do even before Batman's training, was really great. Keep up the good work! |
 Gohanzgirl 3/21/05 . chapter 1man I love your stories! Again a beautifull Dicky story! |
 eset 2/15/05 . chapter 1This was a very well writeen story, with good character development and descriptions. I espescially loved your use of language (In your face 10th grade English class, people other than me use words like "aphorism"in common speach).
One thing you might want to try is breaking your story up on different screens by posting different chapters as different chapters. That way people like me with no willpower have definite breaks so they remeber to stop reading and actually write their Pascal papers...
Or maybe thats just me. |
 Bumpkin 8/6/04 . chapter 1That was a most satisfying read, it alternated between making me laugh and smile and tear and sniff... Awesome. You are a very talented writer and I have enjoyed many of your stories and this by far is one of my favourites.
*please* keep penning,
Marns |
 Amber 2/18/04 . chapter 1 I know this is one of your old story's
but have you ever thought of making a sequal.
please just think about it.
well keep up the good work.
bye. |