|Reviews for The Devil and His Queen|
| CBBW3words8letters 11/2/10 . chapter 5
Great story )
keep going, can't wait for more :-)
| o 10/30/10 . chapter 4
Hmm. Is Jenny the goddes of witchcraft Hecate in this version? She sort of fits the role.
| TriGemini 10/30/10 . chapter 5
Sounds like Chuck is going to use Nate's situation to his advantage in order to get Blair for himself.
Not that it's surprising. Chuck always wants what he can't and shouldn't have.
I'm excited to find out, what'll happen next. So, until then.
| 24hrscout 10/30/10 . chapter 5
Ah, Chuck has a plan! Really like this fic , please keep writing!
| Guardian Izz 10/30/10 . chapter 5
I DO hope the idea of matrimony will soon occur to him. Sure he's a commitment phobic in any time era, but the thing is the Greek gods weren't as concerned about stolen virtues as the VOW of MARRIAGE!
That was why Demiter was so angry. Cause as his wife Persephone BELONGED to him, especially since they consummated the union.
I know that some people might protest, but I DO hope that he will if not rape then force himself on her tearing apart her chiffon at the very least and hurting her a little the first time as she has her hymmen. She'll heal uickly as a goddess and a titan's daughter no less (an interesting thing to remind Chuck about since as such she would give him fine GODS as SONS... her blood being strong and powerful and she is no doubt fertile as she IS the daughter fo Goddess of fertility and harvest)
So yes, in the myth Hades did ravage Persephone first but almost immediately he married her, and Zeus (aka Nate) supported that union. I can't wait to read about Eleanor roam Olympus in fury for Chuck taking her daughter's treasured maidenhead AND holding her a prisoner nbound to him in the Underworld.
I remember reading in some psychological essays that some see this as a case where the victim falls in love with her kidnapper and captor. Oooh, and I can't wait to read the kidnapping scene. You HAVE to include the carriage scene with teh black stallions! Him capturing Blair in his strong arms and her screaming trying to break loose while they disappear into the ground.
| cokis 10/30/10 . chapter 5
I really like your story I cant wait to see whats going to happen next.
| z0ey 10/30/10 . chapter 5
yay u updated :))) i'm soo happy.. i loved this chapter.. its getting intense! poor blair, i already feel sorry for her! please update soon, cant wait to read more
| QueenBee10 10/30/10 . chapter 5
| supernatural13 10/30/10 . chapter 5
loved it update as soon as possible
| epicCHAIR 10/30/10 . chapter 5
great chapter! please ud soon
| Guardian Izz 10/17/10 . chapter 4
I must admit that though I understand the subtle mystery you were trying to lay basis for wiht Nate and Serena, I was EXTREMELY disappointed by the poor and unpolite receival of Blair- as a goddess and a daughter to a titant no less she ought to have been formally introduced, and if anything Nate ought to have FOCUSED on her for at least one momentif not for her BEAUTY which you have been praising so in this story - then for the sake of knowing what POWERS she harbuored!
Yes very disappointed. I thought it would be a grand introduction and Chuck would be late and miss it, and then would spot and follow her out to hte garden, and THEN in the end ask Nate who she was ebore she left - and finally find out.
Oh well ... still looking forward to the next install
update soon )
| z0ey 10/16/10 . chapter 4
omg, this is soo interestingg, which is so not a good thing because now i cant wait until the next chapter ( please update soon.. i loved loved loved this chapter!
| Tf 10/16/10 . chapter 4
| READER120 10/16/10 . chapter 4
I LOVE THIS chuck is sooo hades
| TriGemini 10/16/10 . chapter 4
Loved the interaction between Blair and Chuck. Not to mention, the fact that neither of them knows who the other is, as well.
Can't wait until they both make that discovery.
Looking forward to more. So, until then.