AAAAAAAAAAHHHH!CONTINUE!That was so good!

Whoa! I'm surprised by this. Really O_O

Inspired by Tsukihime? XD

It's interesting depression-sensei!

I really like it! :3 Pleeease pleease continue it *puppy dog eyes* (**)

Continue PwEeZ :3 I think this will be awesome!

More pls! D: I so damn interested in your story.. looking forward nex chapter. Love it D

OMG, you MUST continue this! So intense!...And so the kind of story that I like! I loved it! Good job!

AHHH, OMG i love the ritsu that you portrayed. as some people may have observed, i'm a ritchan fanatic. even if she doesn't have much fans because she's not as moe and cutesy like everyone else in the show, i think that she's still pretty rad.

the mio and ritsu pairing is a classic. YOU CAN'T BEAT THE CLASSICS! XD sorry just ranting here

anyways, this is a really unique setting. it's awesome! i can tell right off the bat that this'll be a good one. Please continue. This thing has a lot of potential.

Weird. Deeply, profoundly weird.

In conclusion: weird.

(P.S. Weeeeeeeeeird.)

this sounds interesting, if you are going to make a story of this i would definitively read it.

lol i've been in love with horror,gore and dark story this year lol blame my friends for forcing me to watched those kind of movies! xD

gosh i love vampiress and

oho mitsu vampires are really smexylicious :3 lulzy

but i wanna know what happened before this vampire thingy and why does mio have to kill ritsu? TT

It's been a long time since my last review! XD

Let's go to the point..

A vampire warrior Mio killing a vampire evil Ritsu.. Why not? It's different and really cool!

All this blood... I'm a fan of splatter, so I liked it!

If your going to write a story out of this, I think you should find a way to keep them more in character.. I know that it might seem impossible, but if there are pieces of their lives before the murder, you should try to portrait them in character to the maximum!

Hope the review is helpful!

Maybe some things aren't clear.. Well, I'm italian.. Blame the italian school system and the fact that a quarter of us can use english!

Bye bye! :):)

I never really like Dark story but this really make me hooked!

Now I want more, so please update this story!

this has good potential..now, i demand a continuation.. xDD

UPDATE! and btw,PLS also do with UFNO! i love that stoweeh! x3 0okini,ran-san xD

Hey... It is not confusing at all... I am agree with what Majestic-san said... It is unpredictable... *maybe because it is still a snippet...* looking forward for the next one... XD

Confusing? I'd rather say it was...unpredictable. :D I have seriously no idea what's going to happen next, and it's a lovely feeling! xD Great work so far!

I eagerly await the next part.

"My opponent. My soul mate. My love."

I felt like askjdaskdjad when I read that e_e it really touched me for some reason.

Great story, thanks for the nice read!