Hmmm. Catherine would have called security up to the room, and at least the raper in the room would have been captured. Catherine would have also insisted they go to the hospital immediately. But you have artistic license, and who knows how anyone would react in such a situation.

Billy... so cute a name for a roach! Loved the public sex scene during the race. Good so far, as I'm just finishing chap 5.

good but its reply not replay & are racing not is but apart from your grammar i am enjoing it so far! big lady H fan! and Catherine of course! :D xx

I like the story! Well done.

Nice ending:)

thanks! loved this story! you definitely have to write more catherine/heather-storys... maybe a sequel! *hint-hint*

hope you had a great vacation!

An interesting story that would lend itself well to a sequel. Thank you for sharing it with us.

I am so enjoying this story, also that finally Lindsey finally is showing some sense that she is rarely credited with, going to Grissom. What will Heather and Catherine get up to next, I'd love for Heather to do something drastic with those boys, perhaps a nice invitation to her dominion for the evening. mwah hahaha. one can but dream. I'll wait for the next update.

i have to smile everytime i see there has been an update to this story ;)

more, please?... (since it*s my birthday tomorrow, and i love presents)

luckily the phone was answered this time!

i can so imagine heather barging in there like that!

nice updates, like always )

wohoooo... two awesome updates in a row - keep them coming

I would never have thought that those two would really hit it off, but WOW, I am really loving this. In the words of Oliver Twist, Please may I have some more?

glad it wasn't too urgent

nice update, really like the chemistry... wondering how lindsey will react when they meet/sees them together? )

lovely update ;)

hopefully it wasn*t a bad idea to not answer the phone this time?

interresting story so far... like it! can't wait for the dinner!

hope you will be able to update soon ;)