Hey!
I really really like this story..hope you update soon..
I adore this pairing..stella x noctis..
Hehee;-)

This story is just fantastic. I'm really hoping that you didn't discontinue this. I'll be forever waiting for an update.

Wow ! Your story is sooo awesome ! I LOVE your writing style and the ideas you got here, absolutely amazing. I started reading this story and i couldn't stop, really. I don't know what it is, but everything about this story is so captivating, for example the plot, Its a serious theme, wich I personally like a lot ;) I am really excited for your next chapters and hope that you upload fast! They will be as great as this chapter, i am pretty sure about that! ;) xoxo

I've been reading this story for awhile now and realized I never reviewed it (I thought I did but..) when it really deserved more reviews.

This story is brilliant and I really like your writing style. Cliffhangers were never my thing but still, I look forward to the next chapter!

Whoa, I haven't been on fanfic for a looong time...but here I am again! This chapter pulled me back inside the story right away. I wonder what'll happen now that Noctis doesn't believe in redemption. Did he truly ever believe in the concept? I think this story often seems to delve into the human psyche, and that's why it's interesting. Please continue this story! It actually has potential, and you are a fantastic writer! When the game comes out, I'm sure this one will be getting a heap of reviews!

this is great! you should update quick! its getting good.

Whoa...I think this is the best chapter yet. Midway through the chapter, you had me shuddering and fighting down a lump in my throat. And nope, didn't see that coming at the end...! Great use of flashbacks! I eagerly await your next chapter!

OH MY GOD THIS- THIS IS AMAZING!

I hope you find the time to write the next chapter because this huge cliffhanger is killing me.

Love,

Springflake

LOL. I backtracked and will review this chapter :) The story should be getting more reviews anyways Oh you'll be getting one review per chapter from me alright :) (If I don't get busy but I will drop by and make comments).

Anyways, I'm glad my review made you feel happy - this story is quite amazing and I'm loving it. Your writing style is really good and I wish I could write like you. I like your interpretation of the characters and they're really...alive, if you get what I mean :)

Good luck with the next chapter! Hopefully your muse doesn't run away, hehe.

I have a feeling Noctis would be able to go through with it, but I still cant wait to read what happens next.

Oh my gosh, I seriously love this story! It's captivating and amazing. Please continue 3

Thanks!

very cruel of you, leaving it on a cliffie like that

Hi!

This chapter definitely has me at the edge of my seat

I felt so sad for Lillian, especially when she screamed for Noctis not to touch her.

And I especially like how Noctis seems torn between Stella and Lillian.

I eagerly await for yor next chapter, hoping Noctis really isn't going to kill Stella

I think this chapter's great! The exchange between Noctis & Stella didn't come off as awkward at all, it rather seemed more personal. I wonder what his reason is; surely, something involving Lillian.

The scene with Cy and the Queen was the best part!

Its not easy to pull of scenes like that one (with a muddle of emotions like love, lust, guilt, fear), but you did a good job. I particularly like how you ended the chapter & loved its overall "Steamy-ness"! Keep it up! :D

I thought the scene with Cy was fine- great even- so don't fret! It will certainly added a new dimension to the story. I'm excitied to know what will become of Noctis and Stella's burgeoning relationship. Please continue! :D