Naughty Bella! Would've love more of this story!

excellent story.

Damn, why did it end? I did not want that to be over. Little Vixen this Bella is. Well i loved this, and wish there was more but it was amazing none the less.
-A

Holy crap, this was sexy. Normally, the idea of taping sex is a turn-off, having the potential to *turn* the intimacy. But this... jfc. What are the chances you'd continue this? ;)

OMG! You need to make this into a longer story, even if it's a two shot. JUST SOMETHING! I can just imagine them meeting up now and it's so cool in my head but i hate imagining things. So i think you should write more. Just for me. Pretty please. I'll love you forever and ever...in a none creepy way of course :P Man i'm such a perv for wanting to read more of this lol
PLEASEEE! :D:D:D

That was awesome! One that I would love to see expanded into many more chapters. What do you say? Thanks. )

wow...that was amazing! would love to see what happens next! lol

You got to be kidding me, that is it! *Pouty Face* I want more!

*whistling* Mighty fine story you got here...Got me all hot and bothered.

You should really consider a part two to this story. So fuck hot.

That was beautifully hot. haha. That should be a story instead of a one shot!

GAH! You just can't leave it like that! There just HAS to be more...right? Isn't there?

This was really creative. Thank you for posting this, even if it didn't end with them wound together in post-coital bliss! ;)

Great story. Would love to see them meeting!

Fablous!

I am a raging mess at the moment, and I say that for the best and worst of reasons. That was sensational, I have no other words, but I want, no, I need more. And I know there is no more and that makes me so sad. Brilliant, evocative, powerful writing. Well well done. Thanks. ;)