sweet storryyyy

I Loved the story you wrote, it probaly helps that i love Gravitation to! Please do continue though!

Sleep sleep time...? Wow Shuichi... I know you act like a kid sometimes but when you go from that to making Yuki practically beg... thats just funny! XD

love how yuki calls shuichi a brat the hole time XD

Talk about hot! On his hands and knees begging, that is sexy. That was also a good lemon. Nice job!

Nothing like fun and games between your favorite couple. Keep going!

Aww, that was really cute. Yuki being all sorry and sweet to his baby Shu! Awwwww! Please write more! I love this so much. It is really funny. I like it. :)

It was delicious! Yet to fast for my tastes. :.( But that didnt stop me from re-reading it about a million times! XD

Wow that was hot

Loved it ( sing song voice) and chibi me did jump in the air with glee

aww...i liked it :( i barely even read the first chapter, and i want to find out what happens next! hey rude people, SHUT THE FUCK UP! don't got something nice to say? don't fucking say it at all! i don't see you busting your ass to write a fanfic! you were warned it was rated M, so if you can't handle the pressure, go back to G you stupid kindergarteners! PancakeMix, you have nice stories, anyone who doesn't think so, GO FUCK OFF!

AWESOME I LOVE THIS FIC

I thought the story was sweet that Yuki was so romantic for to the rude review Bug off I have read more steamy stuff on write more about Song and Rico's honeymoon because it was a nice start.

I don't think it comes down to the matter of a dictionary...more of learning to read what you type for the words there, not what you want them to be.

Or another way: Re-learn English. (But that's the harsh way to say it.)