If you hate to write them, you still do a good job!

I liked the twist and turns of this story. I like a faulty Edward and fiesty Bella.

I really hope theres a sequel! i loved it!

I was hesitant about starting this story because I usually don't like a lot of angst, but I'm so glad I did... I really liked your writing and this was a great read.

AMAAAAAAAAAAZING!

I just finished reading this on my Kindle and was disappointed to see that you hadn't ever posted the alternate ending you discribed. This was a great story though.

Oh thank god...in a way I was hoping it wasn't Bella the mistress. You had me going crazy lol

really good story.

well at least he got to do this alone. His daddy knows. I bet he gave Renee that Ruby Ring. LOL this is just getting so bad. Funny almost.

oh yes wait until she gets the part of you ff her mother.. well folks this should be interesting.

Well you little twisted I could not for my life ever be in a relationship with someone who had screwed my mother...NEVER

Excellent! Loved it.

My great grandfather was from Naples. I did not grow up among extended family. I feel like I missed out. Uh so I am guessing the angst will come when she finds out he fucked her mother. If Sicilians are known for their fiery tempers, what about Neopolitans?

well it turned out great for bella and edward didnt it im happy for them sad for his creepy father because he lost more than a selfelish spoilt wife and a crazy bitch i cant see for the life of me why he would care anyway if she was his x it was just sez it wasnt like he was going to marry her and bring her home to be family ha ha

well that was all well and good but i dont see how your going to get them back together happly married and heaven ever after in one chapter