not a bad idea

Great One-shot with the most powerful dragon in Yu-gi-oh, the Blue-eyes White Dragon! I can't wait for the next for the next one! Hey, is it ok to give a hint on who the next familiar will be or where they are from.

See ya,

S-999

The moment you began to describe Kisara's human form, I had the sudden feeliig of deja-vu. Then I looked at the title, then thought about the egg, then looked at the title again, and then I laughed. It was a good laugh!

You did a very nice job with this, and I can only hope that you at least make another scene or two for this like you've done before. As to evening the odds, well... there are other denizens of the Shadow Realm that could no doubt give Kisara a run for her money.

And this chapter has helped me with Champions Route, as I've been looking for a way to describe a dragon's roar. So thanks!

Good Luck in Life and Writing!

Great Story and chapter! Looking forward to what else you can come up with

You didn't... but you did... My god this was awesome. An Archivist... I've had that idea too many times to count when thinking of fanfiction. Though not by the same name but something similar. I loved this chapter! It just had rule of cool all over it. I've gotta say, you've got awesome ideas for this and all the more kudos to you. Er... not much else to say other than that.

WhizkidHV

I was squeeing all throughout this chapter. Seriously. Zen-Aku is possibly one of my favorite characters of all time, and you portrayed him quite well, I'd say!

Good chapter but you still haven't answered us who is Crimson Archivist?

Sorry if I have to put this here but I just need to release it ya know I feel so left out in the Znt verse after knowing that it was so much bigger than I thought sigh I haven't felt this feeling for so long I just wish that I could read it the light novels as to keep me occupied(imagination can only keep me occupied for so long) well sorry about my ranting hope you guys can forgive me

I always love when this updates, but who is Crimson Archivist?

I liked this chapter! It was awesome! I just started to read this series of one shots yesterday and I will say I am hooked but I have a few questions to ask.

1. Was the creature is Siesta's a Chaos or something?

2. What was it that the fanboy saw in his backpack that made him curse? It had to be something big like a gundam to something like that.

3. What was that ex-God that was talking to the Crimson Archivist as well as the Dragon like armor he used to free Louise from Wardes' grip?

4. and Finally what was that this that the guy was flying at the end of the one-shot.

They all sound familiar but I cannot for the life of me place a name to them.

Amazing!, I love this chapter

your story is awesome. though I am still hopping for a post season 4 Ron Stoppable to make an appearance.

Okay had to look this up(again but it was worth it) to know what the character was an I gotta say I was pleased keep up the great work

Ah, memories of playing Panzer Dragoon Orta came back to me once you did this... I knew it wasn't Orta, but it still brings me fond memories of boss fights and form switching

Panzer Dragoon! *Head bang on desk* I played Orta for the Xbox! Why didn't I think of that!

A good chapter, though it seemed a tad short. You should thrown in the Tarbes aerial battle. It's right up Panzer Dragoon's ally.

And GRRRRRR...! I have a hard enough time trying to guess these with just the title as a clue, now you're giving us two! Is this revenge for Champion Caster?

Regardless, both sound promising. I'm eager to what comes next! Is it safe to assume that when you do pick one, you'll post the other after it?

Good Luck in Life and Writing!

Incredible story as always. Very well done.

If you are feeling nostalgic...have you ever heard of Legend of the Dragoon? I would absolutely love to see Lavits summoned as Louises familiar after he became the Dragoon of Wind.

Keep up the incredible work.