I like it. Grin is awesome and I like the story idea.

Eeeee! Grin sounds so awesome! :D Great job! I can't wait to see more soon!

sorry, that was accidentaly reviewed anonymusly. PLEASE continue!

yes! you finally updated!

You're not going to update this, are you? T_T

Grammar Nazi time:

Ash fault should be asphalt.

"...finishing what me and Master unintentionally started..."

Should be "Master and I"

Review time:

I love how GRIN thought Flint needed a medic after he got shocked. I guess he is kinda indestructible. )

How long was I out?

'bout 4 hours.

8O

Lol

I didn't realize he meant it literally when he said "it's all behind me!" )

Promised I would leave you a review :P

I always get mad when the people in the town yell at Flint. He was just trying to help...but yeah, society doesn't like people who are a bit different...

I blame pancakes. DARN YOU, PANCAKES!

Loving the story so far :) keep it up!

By the way, if you would like, I could possibly edit your story for ya :P If it wasn't for my dyslexia, I'd be the world's worst grammar Nazi *da dum tssss*

Aw! That was sad. D:

...Baby Brent really needs to put on a shirt. Seriously.

I loved the way you used the word "dysfunctional." :3

More, please? :D

Hi! This story is still very awesome. More, please?

Noticed two little mistakes.

"Masters Eyes lit up as he leaned forward," the e in eyes shouldn't be capitalized. Should be an apostrophe (or whatever they're called...XD) after the r in Master's. That's all I know, though.

Stupid persuasion tactics I thought as I followed Master through town. There should probably be a comma after tactics.

Loving this story! Me wants more GrinxSteve! :O

LIMBO Dib

Aw! I love this! You know, the first thing I thought of when I read about Grin was Gir. Y'know, 'cause if you rearrange the first three letters, you get Gir...XD

This story is awesome! GrinxSteve pairing, yaaaay!