|Reviews for Smile|
| BBR 9/2/12 . chapter 4
I like it. Grin is awesome and I like the story idea.
| Mistcloud-star 12/17/11 . chapter 4
Eeeee! Grin sounds so awesome! :D Great job! I can't wait to see more soon!
| gemstone108 8/31/11 . chapter 4
sorry, that was accidentaly reviewed anonymusly. PLEASE continue!
| Guest 8/19/11 . chapter 4
yes! you finally updated!
| OhHowDelightfullyDreadful 8/13/11 . chapter 3
You're not going to update this, are you? T_T
| Qille 1/23/11 . chapter 3
Grammar Nazi time:
Ash fault should be asphalt.
"...finishing what me and Master unintentionally started..."
Should be "Master and I"
I love how GRIN thought Flint needed a medic after he got shocked. I guess he is kinda indestructible. )
| Qille 1/23/11 . chapter 2
How long was I out?
'bout 4 hours.
I didn't realize he meant it literally when he said "it's all behind me!" )
| imaginarydeathmuffin 10/10/10 . chapter 3
Promised I would leave you a review :P
I always get mad when the people in the town yell at Flint. He was just trying to help...but yeah, society doesn't like people who are a bit different...
I blame pancakes. DARN YOU, PANCAKES!
Loving the story so far :) keep it up!
By the way, if you would like, I could possibly edit your story for ya :P If it wasn't for my dyslexia, I'd be the world's worst grammar Nazi *da dum tssss*
| LIMBO Dib 10/6/10 . chapter 3
Aw! That was sad. D:
...Baby Brent really needs to put on a shirt. Seriously.
I loved the way you used the word "dysfunctional." :3
More, please? :D
| LIMBO Dib 10/2/10 . chapter 2
Hi! This story is still very awesome. More, please?
Noticed two little mistakes.
"Masters Eyes lit up as he leaned forward," the e in eyes shouldn't be capitalized. Should be an apostrophe (or whatever they're called...XD) after the r in Master's. That's all I know, though.
Stupid persuasion tactics I thought as I followed Master through town. There should probably be a comma after tactics.
Loving this story! Me wants more GrinxSteve! :O
| LIMBO Dib 9/29/10 . chapter 1
Aw! I love this! You know, the first thing I thought of when I read about Grin was Gir. Y'know, 'cause if you rearrange the first three letters, you get Gir...XD
This story is awesome! GrinxSteve pairing, yaaaay!