Oh God, I am reading this twelve years too late. I am reading it late enough that your website no longer exists, that you have maybe not visited this site in years. I don't mind my words going unheard except when they are unadulterated praise...

Who ARE you? This is the most beautiful work I have read in a long time. You have struck at the heart of feelings we all know but always struggle to describe. The impermeable membrane, the weightlessness and emptiness of the light heart...

I read your words out loud to the ringing silence of the room, read them out like the poetry they are. I can offer no higher compliment. I hope against hope that you are somewhere writing, that you've been published, that these two stories are not the end of you. Mille grazie.

You wanted to round out the characters a little and I think that's just what you did. And leading the reader to look up Van Gogh's most famous work was good too. Tiny point - Woolf killed herself by drowning in the River Ouse not a lake, but no matter.

I like it!

I really liked this story. You put great detail into characters that started off as really 2 dimensional. Keep writing!

Excellent story. I loved the part about the painting in Kris' bedroom. Please keep writing.

it really sucked. i hope you are not looking for a career in movie scripts or anything else where people would have to be subjected to your torturous ideas and pointless stories. so i'm giving you some well thought out advice... don't ever make someone listen to your stories unless you are trying to kill them or something. it is just painful.

sincerely yours

I loved this story. I am a big fan of WAFFs. The more the better.

Very good. I'm putting this one in my list of favorites.

spiffy... I'm a WAFF fan

enjoyed it! enjoyed the detail, I'm a fan of Van Gogh and the oceans and starry nights and waves. Woofie kind of startled me, too!

You know what? I don't like Charlie's Angels. But I liked this.

One of the best stories I have read so far with some *great* characterizations of all angels, especially Sabrina. Good descriotions of thoughts and feelings. This story shows you don't have to have an "action" story to tell a good story.

Not as good as your other story but it is a great read.

I loved this story. It was very interesting and imaginative, and everyone was in character. I can't wait to read this author's other stories.